Sept. 29, 2020
My niece
The results of the Fuyang finance bureau civil servant exam have been announced. My niece (my young sister’s side) scored second place and with a high score ahead of the others. The finance bureau will recruit two civil servants and, according to her ability, she will definitely be accepted. Meanwhile, she was also shortlisted for an interview with a working committee of organs directly under the government of Anhui province. If she goes follow the procedure, I believe she can be accepted with no doubt because she had shown her strength in the former interview. But the fact doesn't allow her to choose because it is probably that when the first unit announces her for accepting her, the following two units will not get their interview started yet. There are many similar things in one's life. Sometimes you can't make choices. Anyway, Hangzhou is a beautiful city and it has developed economies. Living there is not a bad choice. The only weakness of living there probably is that it's a bit far away from our hometown. But because of the high-speed train, a three hour trip may be fine.
My niece
The results of the Fuyang finance bureau civil servant exam have been announced.
My niece (my young sister’s side) scored second place and with a high score ahead of the others.
The finance bureau will recruit two civil servants and, according to her ability, she will definitely be accepted.
If she goes follows the procedure, I believe she can be accepted with noout a doubt because she had showned her strength in the formerprevious interview.
There are many similar things in one's life.
Sometimes you can't make choices.
Anyway, Hangzhou is a beautiful city and it has a developed economiesy.
Singular; one city so one economy.
Living there is not a bad choice.
But because of the high-speed train, a three hour trip may be fine.
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Nice! Congratulations to your niece!
Sept. 29, 2020
Thank you for your correction, I appreciate it a lot.
Sept. 29, 2020
No problem.
My niece
The results of the Fuyang finance bureau civil servant exam have been announced.
My niece (my young sister’s side) scored second place and with a high score ahead of the others.
The finance bureau will recruit two civil servants and, according to her ability, she will definitely be accepted.
Meanwhile, she was also shortlisted for an interview with a working committee of organspeople directly under the government of Anhui province.
"organs" are inner parts of the body, so organ is the wrong word to use here. I'm not sure what you are trying to say, so I am guessing you mean maybe: people, citizens, managers, or representatives
If she goes follow the procedurethrough with it, I believe she canwill be accepted with noout a doubt because she had shown her strength in the former interview.
But theis fact doesn't allow her to choose because it is probablye that when the first unit announces her for accepting herance, the following two units willould not gethave started their interview started yet.
There are many similar things in one's life.
Sometimes you can't make choices.
Anyway, Hangzhou is a beautiful city and it has developed economies.
Living there is not a bad choice.
The only weaknessdisadvantage of living there probably is that it's a bit far away from our hometown.
Weakness and strength is used when describing negative and positive traits of people, objects, businesses, or groups.
Disadvantage and advantage is used when describing negative and positive aspects of a situation or choice.
But because of the high-speed train, a three hour trip may be fine.
Sept. 29, 2020
Meanwhile, she was also shortlisted for an interview with a working committee of organspeople directly under the government of Anhui province.
安徽省直属机关工作委员会。but I don’t know how to say it in English, I have checked the “机关” and the dictionary tells me it’s the organ.
Sept. 29, 2020
Thank you for your correction and detailed notes. Sorry for I don’t know Spanish and German, if I knew them I can teach you for sure.
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