Jan. 5, 2020
My new year vacation
This year, my new year vacation is from 28th of December until the 6th of January. soo long! 29th of December I retuned my hometown. I met old friends when I was a high school student. Everyone is thirty years old. some people already celebrated, some people is looking for new a job, some people already give a birth.Everyone good choice for ownself.
今年の年末休みは12月28日から1月6日でした。とても長かったです！また、12月29日に地元に帰りました。地元では高校生の頃の友達と会いました。ある人は既に結婚し、ある人は新しい仕事を探しており、ある人は子供を産んでいました。みんな自身にとって良い選択をしていました。
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My nNew yYear's vacation
This year, my nNew yYear's vacation is from the 28th of December until the 6th of January.
It's soo long!
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I met old friends when I was afrom high school student.
Everyone is thirty years old now.
sSome people have already celebratgotten married, some people isare looking for new a jobs, some people already giave a birth.
Everyone has made good choices for ownselfthemselves.
My nNew yYear v's Vacation
This year, my nNew yYear v's Vacation is from 28th of December 28 until the 6th of January 6.
It's soo long!
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sSome people are already celebrated, smarried. Some people isare looking for new a job, ss. Some people already gihave a birthchildren.
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Jan. 5, 2020
This year, my nNew yYear v's Vacation is from 28th of December 28 until the 6th of January 6.
"Vacation" doesn't need to be capitalized because it isn't a proper noun.
Jan. 5, 2020
This year, my nNew yYear v's Vacation is from 28th of December 28 until the 6th of January 6.
Yes, Bees is correct. Vacation of course shouldn't be capitalized here. I'd correct my typo but I don't see a way to change it.
Jan. 5, 2020
My nNew yYear v's Vacation
"Vacation" should be capitalized here even though it isn't a proper noun because it is part of the title.
Plus, it should be "New Year's Vacation", just like New Year's Eve and New Year's Day.
My nNew yYear vacation
"New Year" is the name of a holiday, so we capitalize it.
This year, my nNew yYear vacation is from the 28th of December until the 6th of January.
It's soo long!
On the 29th of December I returned to my hometown.
I met old friends when I was afrom high school student.
Everyone is thirty years old.
sSome peoplof them have already celebratmarried, some people isare looking for new a job, and some peoplhave already give a birthhad children.
Everyone has made good choices for ownselfthemselves.
Jan. 5, 2020
This year, my nNew yYear vacation is from the 28th of December until the 6th of January.
"Vacation" doesn't need to be capitalized because it isn't a proper noun.
Jan. 5, 2020
My nNew yYear vacation
"Vacation" should be capitalized here even though it isn't a proper noun because it is part of the title.
Plus, it should be "New Year's Vacation", just like New Year's Eve and New Year's Day.
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Everyone good choice for ownself. Everyone has made good choices for Everyone made good choices for Everyone has made good choices for Everyone has made good choices for |
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今年の年末休みは12月28日から1月6日でした。 |
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とても長かったです！ |
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また、12月29日に地元に帰りました。 |
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地元では高校生の頃の友達と会いました。 |
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ある人は既に結婚し、ある人は新しい仕事を探しており、ある人は子供を産んでいました。 |
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みんな自身にとって良い選択をしていました。 |
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