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I bought some new plants after moving to my new apartment.
The first one I bought was a blueberry plant. I was strolling on my phone and accidentally noticed that the flowers of blueberries are cute and beautiful. When my blueberry was delivered to me, it had a few fruits and some flowers on the tops of the branches -- that's a long story. I will tell it alone someday.
After planting this blueberry plant, I found it was fun to plant fruit because you could enjoy both the flowers and the fruit. Then I bought some strawberry plants.
I'm very happy when I get up every day and see my fruits become bigger and bigger.
My New Plants
I bought some new plants after moving to my new apartment.
更简洁地说: The first one I bought was a blueberry plant.
NOTE: You can safely delete the phrase "I bought."
注意:您可以安全地删除短语"I bought."。
I was更平滑: When strolling on my phone and, I accidentally noticed that the flowers of blueberries flowers are cute and beautiful.
COMMENT: Here in Shizuoka City, Japan my wife and I also have a blueberry plant. It blossoms in March and the blueberries ripen in August.
When my blueberry was delivered to me, i也有可能: At first, my blueberry plant had a few fruits and some flowers on the tops of the branches --only a few flowers.
that'OPTION A: How I came to own that plant is a long story.¶
OPTION A: How that plant became mine is a long story.
I will tell it alonOPTION A: Perhaps I will tell that story someday.¶
OPTION B: Perhaps I'll share that tale someday.
After planting this blueberry plant, I found it was fun to plant fruit because you could enjoy both theits flowers and the fruit.
COMMENT: Indeed. In our garden in Shizuoka, we have blackberries too. I will trying kiwi plants. (Strawberries are possible, but insects love to eat strawberries!)
Then I bought some strawberry plants.
I'm very happy when I get up every day andtoo see my fruits become bigger and bigger.
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My New Plants
I bought some new plants after moving to my new apartment.
The first one I bought was a blueberry {plant | bush}.
We normally call them “bushes,” but “plant” is OK.
I was stcrolling on my phone and accidentallyhappened to noticed that {the flowers of blueberries | blueberry flowers} are cute and beautiful.
When my blueberry was delivered to me, it had {a few berries | some fruits} and some flowers on / at the tops of the branches --
In my version of English, we only use “a few fruits” when we mean “a few kinds of fruit,” but others might use it differently—I don’t know.
that's a long story.
I will tell it alone someday.separately someday. | I will tell it some other time.
Suggestion: But that’s a story for another day.
In your original sentence, “alone” would describe you: you would tell the story by yourself, without assistance from other people.
After planting this blueberry plant, I found it was fun to plant fruit because you could enjoy both the flowers and the fruit.
Then I bought some strawberry plants.
I'm very happy when I get up every day and see my fruits {becomeing | getting} bigger and bigger.
“Become” is not idiomatic to me in this sentence. “Becoming” sounds better, but “getting” is most natural.
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The first one I bought was a blueberry plant. The first one I bought was a blueberry {plant | bush}. We normally call them “bushes,” but “plant” is OK. 更简洁地说: The first one NOTE: You can safely delete the phrase "I bought." 注意:您可以安全地删除短语"I bought."。 |
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COMMENT: Here in Shizuoka City, Japan my wife and I also have a blueberry plant. It blossoms in March and the blueberries ripen in August. |
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When my blueberry was delivered to me, it had a few fruits and some flowers on the tops of the branches -- When my blueberry was delivered to me, it had {a few berries | some fruit In my version of English, we only use “a few fruits” when we mean “a few kinds of fruit,” but others might use it differently—I don’t know.
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I will tell it alone someday. I will tell it Suggestion: But that’s a story for another day. In your original sentence, “alone” would describe you: you would tell the story by yourself, without assistance from other people.
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After planting this blueberry plant, I found it was fun to plant fruit because you could enjoy both the flowers and the fruit. This sentence has been marked as perfect! After planting this COMMENT: Indeed. In our garden in Shizuoka, we have blackberries too. I will trying kiwi plants. (Strawberries are possible, but insects love to eat strawberries!) |
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Then I bought some strawberry plants. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Then I bought some strawberry plants. |
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I'm very happy when I get up every day and see my fruits become bigger and bigger. I'm very happy when I get up every day and see my fruit “Become” is not idiomatic to me in this sentence. “Becoming” sounds better, but “getting” is most natural. I'm very happy when I get up every day |
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