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chippie

Feb. 8, 2022

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My new pen friend

Jim is my new pen friend. He is from England. He likes sports and games. His favourite sport is swimming. He often goes swimming in the afternoon. He wants to be a good swimmer. At weekends, he never goes swimming. He plays football with his friends.

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He wants to become a good swimmer.

My new pen friendpal

“Pal” is a old-fashioned word for “friend” and “pen pal” is a set phrase that means a friend that you talk to mainly through letters.

Jim is my new pen friendpal.

He is from England.

He likes sports and games.

His favourite sport is swimming.

He often goes swimming in the afternoon.

He wants to be a good swimmer.

AtOn weekends, he never goes swimming.

HInstead, he plays football with his friends.

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Good, very clear. Do you and Jim write letters in English too?

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chippie

Feb. 8, 2022

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Thank you! Jim knows Vietnamese ^v^ He teaches me English

My new pen friend

Jim is my new pen friend.

Or penpal

He is from England.

He likes sports and games.

His favourite sport is swimming.

He often goes swimming in the afternoon.

He wants to be a good swimmer.

At weekends, he never goes swimming.

HInstead, he plays football with his friends.

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No mistakes, nice work!

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chippie

Feb. 8, 2022

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Thank you!!!

My new pen friend


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My new pen friendpal

“Pal” is a old-fashioned word for “friend” and “pen pal” is a set phrase that means a friend that you talk to mainly through letters.

Jim is my new pen friend.


Jim is my new pen friend.

Or penpal

Jim is my new pen friendpal.

He is from England.


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

He likes sports and games.


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His favourite sport is swimming.


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He often goes swimming in the afternoon.


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He wants to be a good swimmer.


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He wants to become a good swimmer.

At weekends, he never goes swimming.


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AtOn weekends, he never goes swimming.

He plays football with his friends.


HInstead, he plays football with his friends.

HInstead, he plays football with his friends.

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