Oct. 3, 2023
My new friend
Recently I am pleased to use Instagram since I made a new friend on it. She is E and from Mexico. I want to travel Mexico since I watched the movie <Coco>. As I know E better, I find out surprisely we share many common for example we both like metal musics and horror movies.
这几天我一直在使用Instagram，因为我在Instagram上认识了一位新朋友，来自墨西哥的E。自从看了电影《Coco》之后，我就对墨西哥充满了憧憬。随着我对E的进一步了解，我发现我们有许多共同的爱好，比如都喜欢听金属乐，看恐怖电影。
Recently, I am pleasexcited to use Instagram since I made a new friend on itthere.
Pleased is a little formal. Excited is more natural :)
She is E and from Mexico.
"and" is OK, but it is more natural without.
I've wanted to travel to Mexico since I watched the movie <"Coco>".
As I get to know E better, I am finding out, surpriselyingly, that we sharve many things in common f. For example, we both like metal musics and horror movies.
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What a nice chance to make a new friend! I hope you can get to know each other more and more :)
Oct. 3, 2023
Thank you for the revise
Hope u have a good day😇
My new friend
Recently, I am pleased to usehave enjoyed using Instagram since I made a new friend on it.
ShHer name is E., and she is from Mexico.
“Her name” to avoid repetition. The original sentence sounded odd.
I have wanted to travel to Mexico ever since I watched the movie <Coco>.
Or if you want to emphasize that it is because of the movie that you want to travel: I have been inspired by the movie Coco, and I want to travel to Mexico.
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Be careful with your punctuation!
Oct. 3, 2023
Thank you for the revise. Help me a lot.
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She is E and from Mexico.
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I want to travel Mexico since I watched the movie <Coco>. I have wanted to travel to Mexico ever since I watched the movie Or if you want to emphasize that it is because of the movie that you want to travel: I have been inspired by the movie Coco, and I want to travel to Mexico. I've wanted to travel to Mexico since I watched the movie |
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