Dec. 9, 2022
My new friend
It’s a little crazy, but I do believe that friendship would occur in some place that you cannot believe. And people are really different when you stay with them and when you hear them from others.
My new friend has a easy remember name, and he is experienced(I would love to describe that he is as old as my uncle, how to write it in English polite? Thanks for your help). In some ways I could see some similarities between him and my father: popular and love to make new friends, don’t hesitate to spend money when staying with friends, has an excellent memory, also know much about how to play romantic tricks in life.
When staying with him, I feel comfortable, full of the energy to try new things and learn to think about how to treat the world more.
And the trip to the Indian street with his guide really means a lot for me. I would write it in the next article.
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And people are really different when you stay with them and when you hear about them from others.
My new friend has an easy to remember name, and he is experienced. (I would love to describe that he ishim as old as my uncle, how todo I write ithat in polite English polite? Thanks for your help).)
I think this is what you're trying to say: "My new friend has an easy to remember name and he is like an uncle to me. "
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That sounds awesome!
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I wouldill write about it in themy next articlejournal entry.
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I'm looking forward to reading it. Nice work!
Dec. 11, 2022
Thanks mari, your feedback are always really helpful, especially about how to describe something concise！
And people are really different when you stay (?) with them andcompared to when you hear about them from others.
When you “stay with” someone, you sleep in their home or perhaps share a hotel room with them. Is this what you mean?
Dec. 11, 2022
And people are really different when you stay (?) with them andcompared to when you hear about them from others.
Hello Joetofu, what I mean is that spending time with people to talk and explore something new, which phrase do you recommend for this situation? Thanks
Dec. 11, 2022
In that case, Onediamond’s correction works well: “And people are really different when you're with them compared to when you hear about them from others.”
Dec. 11, 2022
In that case, Onediamond’s correction works well: “And people are really different when you're with them compared to when you hear about them from others.”
Thank you very much!
It’s a little crazy, but I do believe that friendship wouldcan occur in some places that you cannowouldn't believe.
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My new friend has an easy to remember name, and he is experienced(I would love to describe that he is as old as my uncle, how to write it in English polite? Thanks for your help).a little older than me.
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When staying with him, I feel comfortable, full of the energy to try new things and learn to think about how to treat the world morebetter.
I wouldill write it in the next article.
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Good job! He sounds like a cool guy!
Dec. 11, 2022
Thanks onediamondmorning, thanks for the grammar and phrase correction, your feedback is detailed and helps me a lot!
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