Feb. 25, 2025
My new challenge
Today I´m going to start practice my writing skills, I'm living in Canada and I would like to present my CELPIP test, that's the reason that my plan is to write everyday and is very important your help, if you have tips, apps that I can use or something that can help me to achive my goal, I will be so greatfull and glad. One more thing, I can help you to study spanish because I´m colombian, see you later and my best for you in this journey learning a different language.
Today I´m going to start practiceing/practice on my writing skills, I'm living in Canada and I would like to presenttake? my CELPIP test, that's the reason thatwhy my plan is to write everyday and it is very important that your help me , if you have tips, apps that I can use or something that can help me towith achiveing my goal, I will be so greatfull and glad.
(I would like to present my CELPIP)
For present im assuming that you are taking the test unless you plan in the future to present the test to us for us to review your answer
(the reason that my plan)
this one is confusing but as a general rule "thats the x that" is generally in the past but " thats the x y" can be in any time
ie. " thats the reason that i planned"/" thats the reason that my plans" (plans generally refer to previously created plans) past
"thats the reason why I'll start running" future
" thats the reason why I run" present
(very important that you help me)
this is an example where you'd use that a singular time for the present tense
demonstative pronouns and adjectives in english are weird
(that can help me to achive my goal)
nit picking but it sounds better at least in american english
(I will be so greatfull and glad.)
this is the conditional tense in english if we're speaking on something with conditions "if" then we use conditionals to start we generally stay in the tense until the hypothetical as a whole
we dont say
" if you helped me i will be so happy"
we say
"if you helped me i would be so happy"
hypothetical ends when both the condition and the result is said but it can be extended for as long as neccesary
"if you helped me i would be so happy, i would clean the dished, i would pay you money, i would do anything you asked"
the conditional runs until you are done explaning the result
One more thing, I can help you to study spanish because I´m colombian, see you later and myi wish the best for you in this journey of learning a different language.
honestly good these arent any deep flow problems these are almost exclusively small grammatical mistakes that you can drill out of you until you stop
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honestly fantastic. keep up with practice and study and you should sound perfect writing wise very soon
good luck and good night
My nNew cChallenge
Today I´'m going to start practiceing my writing skills,. I'm living in Canada and I would like to present mysit for the CELPIP test, that'which is the reason that my plan is to write every day and why your help is very important your help, i. If you have tips, or apps that I can use or something that can help me to achieve my goal, I will'd be so greatefull and glad.
everyday = adjective
every day = adverbial phrase
"sit for the CELPIP test" or "take the CELPIP test" are both ok
You can delete "and glad" and it would probably sound more natural, but what you have is correct (other than spelling).
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"new language" sounds better than "different language"
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Tips:
1. Break up your sentences more. Run-on sentences are usually considered bad, especially on tests.
2. Capitalization is very important in English. Unlike Spanish, this includes titles, languages, nationalities, etc.
- If you're ever unsure about title capitalization, you can use this website: https://titlecaseconverter.com/
3. I noticed your apostrophies aren't from a standard English keyboard. This isn't a big deal, but I corrected them for you.
You're doing great! I think working on your punctuation will help a lot. =)
My nNew cChallenge
In English, we capitalize words in titles (other than articles, prepositions, and coordinating conjunctions).
Today I´m going to start practiceing my writing skills,. I'm living in Canada and I would like to presenttake my CELPIP test, that'which is the reason that my plan is to write everyday and. Your help is very important your help,, so if you have tips, or apps that I can use or something that can help me to achieve my goal, I will be so greatefull and glad.
Watch out for run-on sentences! Also, I'm not sure if they say "to present a test," but I'm from the US and we tend to say "to take a test".
One more thing,: I can help you to study sSpanish because I´m cColombian, s. See you later and my best for youI wish you the best in this journey learning a different language.
We capitalize "proper nouns," like "Spanish" and "Colombian" in English.
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Muy bien! Espero que entiendas mis correciones :)
Feb. 25, 2025
Muchas gracias, si las entendí todas.
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My new challenge My In English, we capitalize words in titles (other than articles, prepositions, and coordinating conjunctions). My |
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Today I´m going to start practice my writing skills, I'm living in Canada and I would like to present my CELPIP test, that's the reason that my plan is to write everyday and is very important your help, if you have tips, apps that I can use or something that can help me to achive my goal, I will be so greatfull and glad. Today I´m going to start practic Watch out for run-on sentences! Also, I'm not sure if they say "to present a test," but I'm from the US and we tend to say "to take a test". Today I everyday = adjective every day = adverbial phrase "sit for the CELPIP test" or "take the CELPIP test" are both ok You can delete "and glad" and it would probably sound more natural, but what you have is correct (other than spelling). Today I´m going to start practic (I would like to present my CELPIP) For present im assuming that you are taking the test unless you plan in the future to present the test to us for us to review your answer (the reason that my plan) this one is confusing but as a general rule "thats the x that" is generally in the past but " thats the x y" can be in any time ie. " thats the reason that i planned"/" thats the reason that my plans" (plans generally refer to previously created plans) past "thats the reason why I'll start running" future " thats the reason why I run" present (very important that you help me) this is an example where you'd use that a singular time for the present tense demonstative pronouns and adjectives in english are weird (that can help me to achive my goal) nit picking but it sounds better at least in american english (I will be so greatfull and glad.) this is the conditional tense in english if we're speaking on something with conditions "if" then we use conditionals to start we generally stay in the tense until the hypothetical as a whole we dont say " if you helped me i will be so happy" we say "if you helped me i would be so happy" hypothetical ends when both the condition and the result is said but it can be extended for as long as neccesary "if you helped me i would be so happy, i would clean the dished, i would pay you money, i would do anything you asked" the conditional runs until you are done explaning the result |
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One more thing, I can help you to study spanish because I´m colombian, see you later and my best for you in this journey learning a different language. One more thing We capitalize "proper nouns," like "Spanish" and "Colombian" in English. One more thing "new language" sounds better than "different language" One more thing, I can help you to study spanish because I´m colombian, see you later and honestly good these arent any deep flow problems these are almost exclusively small grammatical mistakes that you can drill out of you until you stop |
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