Dec. 10, 2021
My name is Destiny
My name is Destiny – Lady, and I live in Spain. I look like a normal teenager to other people, but I have superpowers that nobody else knows about.
My enemies are cruel people. Day by day, I travel in time. I can go to future and see what will happen. Overall, I spy on evil people. Afterwards, just by snapping my fingers I am back to normal life. Yet, my job isn't done. With the help of my ivisibleness and memory erasing machine, I make evilness in people go away. Secondly, I put goodness superpower in them, in addition for them to not make any more cruelness. I have one rule to respect. If I come back and don't save anyone, I will never be able to travel in time again.
To summarise, I like saving other human beings and spreading goodness. It's better to see good people around and to feel safe, rather then being surronded by evil people!
I can go to the future and see what will happen.
With the help of my invisibleness and memory erasing machine, I make evilness in people go away.
Secondly, I put goodness superpower in them, in additionorder for them to not make any morecommit any cruelnessty.
It's better to see good people around and to feel safe, rather then being surrounded by evil people!
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Dobar posao.
Dec. 12, 2021
Secondly, I put goodness superpower in them, in additionorder for them to not make any morecommit any cruelnessty.
It this correct?
Secondly, I put goodness superpower in them in order for them to not commit any cruelty.
Or better
...... in order for them not to commit any cruelty.
Dec. 13, 2021
Good question.
If you're taking an English test for a grade or writing a business letter = not + to + verb: "not to commit"
In the real world, both are fine, and I'm an English teacher.
Dec. 14, 2021
Thank you very much for taking your time.
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My name is Destiny |
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My name is Destiny – Lady, and I live in Spain. |
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I look like a normal teenager to other people, but I have superpowers that nobody else knows about. |
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My enemies are cruel people. |
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Day by day, I travel in time. |
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I can go to future and see what will happen. I can go to the future and see what will happen. |
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Overall, I spy on evil people. |
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Afterwards, just by snapping my fingers I am back to normal life. |
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Yet, my job isn't done. |
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With the help of my ivisibleness and memory erasing machine, I make evilness in people go away. With the help of my invisibleness and memory erasing machine, I make evilness in people go away. |
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Secondly, I put goodness superpower in them, in addition for them to not make any more cruelness. Secondly, I put goodness superpower in them, in |
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I have one rule to respect. |
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If I come back and don't save anyone, I will never be able to travel in time again. |
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To summarise, I like saving other human beings and spreading goodness. |
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It's better to see good people around and to feel safe, rather then being surronded by evil people! It's better to see good people around and to feel safe, rather then being surrounded by evil people! |
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