April 27, 2024
My name is Ada. I'm a dog.
I slept under my parent's bed because it's dark there and I like spending time there. Now is about 7 in the morning and it's a perfect time to start my day! Usually, I go to my crate and touch my bowl with my paw so that it makes some sound and my parents wake up to feed me. I had to wait an entire hour until they finally wake up! My mom is coming to me and I'm super excited! But now I also see my sister, who was sleeping with my parent in the bed, coming to her own crate which is right next to mine.I don't like it! She might steal my food! I bark to tell her not to come here but she doesn't listen to me! Moreover, my mom is not happy about my behaviour and she says "shh" to calm me down. There's nothing I could do and my sister goes to her crate. Now it's finally time to eat! The food is very tasty and I ate it very quickly. I like to eat!
After breakfast we went outside. We went to our car and dad drove us to the dog's forest. I like this place! I don't have to be on a leash here and sometimes there're another dogs I can say hi to. I walked around and I sniffed a lot of interesting smells. Then, we met a lost dog and my mom had to help him to find his parents. He was very annoying and kept his nose near my butt.
Then we came home and I was happily sleeping the most of the day under the bed.
My name is Ada. I'm a dog.
I slept under my parent's bed because it's dark there and I like spending time there.
Now it is about 7 in the morning and it's a perfect time to start my day!
Usually, I go to my crate and touch my bowl with my paw so that it makes some sound and my parents wake up to feed me.
I had to wait an entire hour until they finally waoke up!
My mom is coming to me and I'm super excited!
But now I also see my sister, who was sleeping with my parent in the bed, coming to her own crate which is right next to mine.I don't like it!
She might steal my food!
I bark to tell her not to come here but she doesn't listen to me!
Moreover, my mom is not happy about my behaviour and she says "shh" to calm me down.
There's nothing I could do and my sister goes to her crate.
Now it's finally time to eat!
The food iwas very tasty and I ate it very quickly.
Keep your tenses consistent!
I like to eat!
After breakfast we went outside.
We went to our car and dad drove us to the dog's forest.
I like this place!
I don't have to be on a leash here and sometimes there' are another dogs I can say hi to.
I walked around and I sniffmelled a lot of interesting smells.
Then, we met a lost dog and my mom had to help him to find his parents.
He was very annoying and kept his nose near my butt.
Then we came home and I was happily sleeping thept most of the day under the bed.
We came home is past, so sleeping should be too
April 28, 2024
Thank you!
I had to wait an entire hour until they finally waoke up!
We went to our car and dad drove us to the dog's forest.
Is Dog's Forest the name of a park? Or did you mean dog park?
I don't have to be on a leash here and sometimes there' are another dogs I can say hi to.
I walked around and I sniffmelled a lot of interesting smellodors.
Then we came home and I was happily sleeping the most of the dayspent most of the day happily sleeping under the bed.
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This was really cute :)
April 28, 2024
Dog's Forest is an actual place's name. Thanks!
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I bark to tell her not to come here but she doesn't listen to me! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Moreover, my mom is not happy about my behaviour and she says "shh" to calm me down. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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There's nothing I could do and my sister goes to her crate. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Now it's finally time to eat! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The food is very tasty and I ate it very quickly. The food Keep your tenses consistent! |
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My name is Ada. I'm a dog. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I slept under my parent's bed because it's dark there and I like spending time there. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Now is about 7 in the morning and it's a perfect time to start my day! Now it is about 7 in the morning and it's a perfect time to start my day! |
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Usually, I go to my crate and touch my bowl with my paw so that it makes some sound and my parents wake up to feed me. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I had to wait an entire hour until they finally wake up! I had to wait an entire hour until they finally w I had to wait an entire hour until they finally w |
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My mom is coming to me and I'm super excited! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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But now I also see my sister, who was sleeping with my parent in the bed, coming to her own crate which is right next to mine.I don't like it! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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She might steal my food! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I like to eat! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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After breakfast we went outside. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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We went to our car and dad drove us to the dog's forest. We went to our car and dad drove us to the dog's forest. Is Dog's Forest the name of a park? Or did you mean dog park? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I like this place! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I don't have to be on a leash here and sometimes there're another dogs I can say hi to. I don't have to be on a leash here and sometimes there I don't have to be on a leash here and sometimes there |
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I walked around and I sniffed a lot of interesting smells. I walked around and I s I walked around and I s |
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Then, we met a lost dog and my mom had to help him to find his parents. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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He was very annoying and kept his nose near my butt. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Then we came home and I was happily sleeping the most of the day under the bed. Then we came home and I Then we came home and I We came home is past, so sleeping should be too |
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