Jan. 13, 2023
My mum's visit
I've been busy in the last few days. I have a lot to do because of my mum's visit. I've been doing extra cleaning of my house. I've wondered where to go for our trip and I think we will go to Oxford. It will be one day trip. We will go there by car in the morning and back in the evening. I planned to see some colleges and go to Ashmolean Museum. I still don't know which day we will go, probably Wednesday. It depends on the weather. Next week I won't be able to write here. I won't have time for it, because I will be focused on spending time with my mum.
My mMum's vVisit
We capitalize the first letter of important words in titles.
I've been busy in the last few days.
I have a lot to do because of my mum's visit.
I've been doing extra cleaning of my house.
I've wondered where to go for our trip and I think we will go to Oxford.
It will be a one day trip.
We will go there by car in the morning and be back in the evening.
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We will go there by car in the morning and come back by evening.
I planned to see some colleges and to go to Ashmolean Museum.
I still don't know which day we will go,. It will probably be Wednesday.
It depends on the weather.
Next week I won't be able to writepost here.
I won't have time for it, because I will be focused on spending time with my mum.
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Good work! Have a good time with your Mum!
Jan. 15, 2023
Thank you :)
My mum's visit
I've been busy in the last few days.
or "for the last few days"
I have a lot to do because of my mum's visit.
I've been doing extra cleaning of my house.
I've wondered where to go for our trip and I think we will go to Oxford.
"I've been thinking about where we should go for our trip, and I've decided on Oxford." maybe?
We will go there by carwe'll drive there in the morning and come back in the evening.
you could combine this with the previous sentence
It will be a one-day trip: we'll drive there in the morning and come back in evening
I'm planned to see someing on seeing collegagues and going to Ashmolean Museum.
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nicely written! Please keep in mind that my suggestions are from an American perspective.
the word "mum" stands out as very English - I can't help but read it in an accent :)
Jan. 15, 2023
Thank you for your correction :)
My mum's visit
I've been busy in the last few days.
I have a lot to do because of my mum's visit.
I've been doing extra cleaning of my house.
I've wondered where to go for our trip and I think we will go to Oxford.
It will be a one day trip.
We will go there by car in the morning and come back in the evening.
I planned to see some colleges and go to Ashmolean Museum.
I still don't know which day we will go, probably Wednesday.
This sounds a bit better: I still don't know which day we will go, but we will probably go on Wednesday.
It depends on the weather.
Next week I won't be able to write here.
I won't have time for it, because I will be focused on spending time with my mum.
Feedback
Great job!
Jan. 15, 2023
Thank you for your correction :)
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It will be one day trip. It will be a one day trip. It will be a one day trip. |
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We will go there by car in the morning and back in the evening. We will go there by car in the morning and come back in the evening.
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I still don't know which day we will go, probably Wednesday. I still don't know which day we will go, probably Wednesday. This sounds a bit better: I still don't know which day we will go, but we will probably go on Wednesday. I still don't know which day we will go |
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