June 15, 2021
My Moving History
I am living in Suwon which is a capital city of Gyeonggi province in South Korea.
This is the third city where I live.
My hometown is a small village near Andong where is one of famous traditional cities in Korea.
For my university, I moved to Seoul and lived at a boarding house near my university.
At that time, I took only my computer and I bought all the essential things in Seoul.
After getting a job, I moved to Suwon where I am living now.
I already had many things to move, for example, my bicycle, many books and even a refrigerator.
Now, I have too many things if I would move to another city.
I tried to get unused things away by a minimalism, but I filled other things soon.
I should think twice before buying anything.
My Moving History
I am living in Suwon which is athe capital city of Gyeonggi province in South Korea.
There is only 1 capital, so we would say "the capital" instead of "a capital."
This is the third city where I have lived.
You live in the third city now, but you lived in the other two in the past. So we would use past tense to talk about all three cities.
My hometown is a small village near Andong, whereich is one of the famous traditional cities in Korea.
To talk about a specific city like Andong, we would use "which" instead of "where" even though it is a place.
You could also say, "which is one of many famous traditional cities,"
or "which is a famous traditional city."
For my university, I moved to Seoul and lived at a boarding house near my university.
At that time, I took only my computer and I bought all the essential things in Seoul.
After getting a job, I moved to Suwon where I am living now.
I already had many things to move, for example, my bicycle, many books and even a refrigerator.
Now, I would have too many things if I would move to another city.
I tried to givet unused things away by athrough minimalism, but I soon filled my room with other things soon.
"Get" is if you are taking the things, "give" is for when you are leaving the things with other people.
When you use "filled," you need to say what is being filled. For example, "I filled my closet with clothes" or "I filled my cup with water"
I should think twice before buying anything.
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I hope my corrections make sense. This was written extremely well. It was mostly correct already. I think your level is much higher than you say!
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My Moving History This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I am living in Suwon which is a capital city of Gyeonggi province in South Korea. I am living in Suwon which is There is only 1 capital, so we would say "the capital" instead of "a capital." |
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This is the third city where I live. This is the third city where I have lived. You live in the third city now, but you lived in the other two in the past. So we would use past tense to talk about all three cities. |
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My hometown is a small village near Andong where is one of famous traditional cities in Korea. My hometown is a small village near Andong, wh To talk about a specific city like Andong, we would use "which" instead of "where" even though it is a place. You could also say, "which is one of many famous traditional cities," or "which is a famous traditional city." |
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For my university, I moved to Seoul and lived at a boarding house near my university. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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At that time, I took only my computer and I bought all the essential things in Seoul. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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After getting a job, I moved to Suwon where I am living now. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I already had many things to move, for example, my bicycle, many books and even a refrigerator. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Now, I have too many things if I would move to another city. Now, I would have too many things if I |
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I tried to get unused things away by a minimalism, but I filled other things soon. I tried to give "Get" is if you are taking the things, "give" is for when you are leaving the things with other people. When you use "filled," you need to say what is being filled. For example, "I filled my closet with clothes" or "I filled my cup with water" |
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I should think twice before buying anything. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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