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llimas

Dec. 29, 2024

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My mourning routine

Today, when I wake up, I brushed my teeth, had my supplements and went to grocery store to buy some breads.
When I got home, I cooked two hamburguers to eat with bread. Then, I practiced English by using mobile apps.
For the rest of the day I'm going to study more English.


Hoje, quando eu me levantei, eu escovei meus dentes, tomei meus suplementos e fui até o mercado comprar alguns pães.
Quando eu cheguei em casa, eu cozinhei dois hamburguers para como com pão. Depois disso estudei inglês por aplicativo.
Pro resto do dia, eu vou estudar um pouco mais de inglês.

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My mourning routine

Today, when I waoke up, I brushed my teeth, had my supplements and went to grocery store to buy some breads.

"Wake" is present tense. "Woke" is past tense. So you "woke" up this morning. Bread is the same, singular or plural. You always use "bread" and never "breads".

When I got home, I cooked two hamburguers to eat with bread.

Then, I practiced English by using mobile apps.

For the rest of the day I'm going to study more English.

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Well done! Only a few minor mistakes.

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llimas

Dec. 30, 2024

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Thank you! :D

My mourning routine

Use morning instead of "mourning". Mourning means to grieve over someone.

Today, when I wake up, I brushed my teeth, had my supplements and went to grocery store to buy some breads.

"when I wake up" --> when I woke up. Use past tense to talk about something that already happened.

When I got home, I cooked two hamburguers to eat with bread.

Then, I practiced English by using mobile apps.

This is right, but just sounds a bit weird. We usually just say "apps" or "apps on my phone".

For the rest of the day I'm going to study more English.

Feedback

Very cool!!

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llimas

Dec. 29, 2024

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Thank you! :)

My mourning routine

"mourning" means to grieve after someone's death

Today, when I waoke up, I brushed my teeth, had my supplements, and went to the grocery store to buy some breads.

When I got home, I cooked two hamburguers to eat with the bread.

Then, I practiced English by using mobile apps.

For the rest of the day, I'm going to study more English.

Feedback

Good luck on the rest of your English studies!!!

llimas's avatar
llimas

Dec. 29, 2024

1

Thank you! :)

My mourning routine


My mourning routine

"mourning" means to grieve after someone's death

My mourning routine

Use morning instead of "mourning". Mourning means to grieve over someone.

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Today, when I wake up, I brushed my teeth, had my supplements and went to grocery store to buy some breads.


Today, when I waoke up, I brushed my teeth, had my supplements, and went to the grocery store to buy some breads.

Today, when I wake up, I brushed my teeth, had my supplements and went to grocery store to buy some breads.

"when I wake up" --> when I woke up. Use past tense to talk about something that already happened.

Today, when I waoke up, I brushed my teeth, had my supplements and went to grocery store to buy some breads.

"Wake" is present tense. "Woke" is past tense. So you "woke" up this morning. Bread is the same, singular or plural. You always use "bread" and never "breads".

When I got home, I cooked two hamburguers to eat with bread.


When I got home, I cooked two hamburguers to eat with the bread.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

When I got home, I cooked two hamburguers to eat with bread.

Then, I practiced English by using mobile apps.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Then, I practiced English by using mobile apps.

This is right, but just sounds a bit weird. We usually just say "apps" or "apps on my phone".

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

For the rest of the day I'm going to study more English.


For the rest of the day, I'm going to study more English.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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