March 3, 2025
My Most Recent Trip This Year
In February I went for a trip to a city called Santa Catarina, Brazil.
This city is very beautiful, has a lot of beautiful houses, beaches and trails.
I found out that it is a famous tourist destination for Argentinians, It was crowded by them.
I really enjoyed the trip. I hope I get another opportunity to visit this city again.
In February I went for a trip to a city called Santa Catarina, in Brazil.
Just sounds a little more natural to use "in" here instead of a comma.
This city is very beautiful, and has a lot of beautiful houses, beaches and trails.
I found out that it is a famous tourist destination for Argentinians, Iit was crowded by them.
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Glad you enjoyed your trip! I think the weather is good in Brazil in February too?
March 4, 2025
Yes, it is good even in February. But the weather varies a lot city by city.
When I was in Santa Catarina, the average weather was 28-35 degrees Celsius.
My Most Recent Trip This Year
In February I went foron a trip to a city called Santa Catarina, Brazil.
This city is very beautiful, and has a lot of beautiful houses, beaches and trails.
I found out that it is a famous tourist destination for Argentinians,. It was crowded bywith them.
crowded by = used to describe someone who is surrounded by people (ex: I felt crowded by the other passengers in the train)
crowded with = used to describe a location that is full of people or other things (ex: the shelf is crowded with books)
I really enjoyed the trip.
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Well done!
March 4, 2025
Thank you :)
My Most Recent Trip This Year
In February, I went for a trip to a city called Santa Catarina, in Brazil.
You would use “Santa Catarina, Brazil” only if you were addressing a letter or writing your address on an official form.
This city is very beautiful, and has a lot of beautiful houses, beaches and trails.
I found out that it is a famous tourist destination for Argentinians,. It was crowded bywith them.
I really enjoyed the trip.
I hope I get another opportunity to visit this city again.
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Good job! Im glad your trip was good!
March 4, 2025
Thank you :)
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