June 10, 2020
MY MOST MEMORABLE TRIP
I have been to Hawaii once. I love hot place and beautiful sea, so I like the place for a moment. Hawaii is a lot of nature, and my father have a mortar bike license, so I ride his mortar bike, and we went to see nature. I cannot forget the place which Jurassic Park is made at. It is magnificent for me. I want to get a mortar bike licence and go to Hawaii again.
If you are possible, I would like to know your most memorable trip!!
MY MOST MEMORABLE TRIP
I have been to Hawaii once.
I love hot places and beautiful seas, so I like theis place for a moment.
I deleted "for a moment" because using "for a moment" suggests that you don't like Hawaii anymore.
Hawaii ihas a lot of nature, and my father haves a mortator bike license, so I riode his mortator bike, and we went to see nature.
I cannot forget the place whichere Jurassic Park iwas made at.
It is magnificent for me.
I want to get a mortator bike licencse and go to Hawaii again.
If you are possible, I would like to know your most memorable trip!!
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Your trip to Hawaii sounds like it was so much fun! My most memorable trips were to New York City where I saw really cool art museums, and to New Orleans where I attended a music festival.
June 12, 2020
Thank you for correcting my journal!!
It is one of the best place where I want to go.
MY MOST MEMORABLE TRIP
I have been to Hawaii once.
I love hot places and beautiful seas, so I like the place for a moment.
Hawaii ihas a lot of nature, and my father haves a mortar bike license, so I riode his mortar bike, and we went to see nature.
I cannot forget the place whichere Jurassic Park iwas made at.
It is magnificent forto me.
I want to get a mortar bike licence and go to Hawaii again.
If you are possiblewilling, I would like to know your most memorable trip!!
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I think you may have meant "motor bike" instead of "mortar bike", but I don't know much about bikes.
Overall, well done! I would love to see Hawaii
June 12, 2020
Thank you for correcting my journal!!
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