Oct. 9, 2020
My Mortal Dread Of Pikachu
Pikachu used to scare out of my wits. This small but deadly creature was once my biggest fear. When i was a little boy, someone gave me a set of stickers of Pikachu as a present, I was ecstatic and grateful but then he said, "pikachu could simply kill you by its electric power. Have you noticed there are two red spots on its cheek? That's right, Pikachu releases its power through them. Behold! Otherwise you would be killed!" I dropped the present and ran away immediately, because I was afraid if the stickers themselves could electrocute people. Since then I simply got away whenever I saw something similar to it, until my mother told me there was no such a creature in reality.
Pikachu used to scare the wits out of my witse.
This small but deadly creature was once my biggest fear.
When i was a little boy, someone gave me a set of Pikachu stickers of Pikachu as a present,. I was ecstatic and grateful but then he said, "pPikachu could simply kill you by itwith his electric power.
Have you noticed that there are two red spots on hits cheek?
That's right, Pikachu releases hits power through them.
BeholdTake care!
Otherwise you wouldmight be killed!"
I dropped the present and ran away immediately, because I was afraid ifthat the stickers themselves could electrocute people.
Since then, I simply gotran away whenever I saw something similar to it, until my mother told me that there was no such a creature in reality.
Oct. 10, 2020
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Pikachu used to scare out of my wits. Pikachu used to scare the wits out of m |
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This small but deadly creature was once my biggest fear. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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When i was a little boy, someone gave me a set of stickers of Pikachu as a present, I was ecstatic and grateful but then he said, "pikachu could simply kill you by its electric power. When i was a little boy, someone gave me a set of Pikachu stickers |
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Have you noticed there are two red spots on its cheek? Have you noticed that there are two red spots on hi |
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That's right, Pikachu releases its power through them. That's right, Pikachu releases hi |
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Behold!
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Otherwise you would be killed!" Otherwise you |
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I dropped the present and ran away immediately, because I was afraid if the stickers themselves could electrocute people. I dropped the present and ran away immediately, because I was afraid |
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Since then I simply got away whenever I saw something similar to it, until my mother told me there was no such a creature in reality. Since then, I simply |
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