May 15, 2025
My Mobile Phones
In 2000, I bought my first mobile phone. Its model was Nokia C5 - 03 and it cost 1200 CNY. I thought it was a mobile phone with the best cost - performance.
I didn't have that much money, so my mother - in - law gave me 1000 CNY and I spent 200 CNY.
It was not a smart phone. I could use it only to call and text.
A few years later, I upgraded to a Samsung. Its model was Galaxy S3. I can't remember if it was a smart phone.
Another two or three years later, I bought the Samsung Note series, like Note 4 or Note 5. I bought them at least one year after their release to get a bargain.
The last Samsung smart phone I used was Galaxy S8. I bought it soon after its release, so it was a little expensive.
I feel Android phones can only be used for around three years. After that, the phones can't function well.
My current smartphone is an iPhone. I bought it in the summer of 2020. It still works okay although sometimes it acts very slowly.
My Mobile Phones
In 2000, I bought my first mobile phone.
Its model was a Nokia C5 - -03 and it cost 1200 CNY.
I thought it was a mobile phone with the best cost - performance.
I didn't have that much money, so my mother - in - -in-law gave me 1000 CNY and I spent; I paid the remaining 200 CNY.
It was not a smart phone.
I could use it only to call and text.
A few years later, I upgraded to a Samsung.
ItsThe model was Galaxy S3.
To describe the model of a phone, it's more common to simply say "it is/was a _____", but "the model" is also okay.
I can't remember if it was a smart phone.
Another two or three years later, I bought one of the Samsung Note series, likely the Note 4 or Note 5.
I bought ithem at least one year after theirits release to get a bargain.
Unless you bought more than one phone, the singular "it/its" is better.
The last Samsung smart phone I used was Galaxy S8.
I bought it soon after its release, so it was a little expensive.
I feel Android phones can only be used for around three years.
After that, the phones cadon't function well.
My current smartphone is an iPhone.
I bought it in the summer of 2020.
It still works okay although sometimes it acts verycan be slowly.
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I am also using a Samsung phone! It's about four years old now and I can definitely feel its age. I don't think I can switch over to an iPhone though since I'm so used to Android.
May 15, 2025
Thank you very much.
Its model was Nokia C5 - 03 and it costed 1200 CNY.
I thought it was a mobile phone with the best cost - performance considering its price.
I didn't have that much money, so my mother - in - law gave me 1000 CNY and I spent 200 CNY.
I could only use it only to call and text.
I can't remember if it was a smart phone.
Another two or three years later, I bought the Samsung Note series, like Note 4 or Note 5.
It still works okay although sometimes it act's very slowly.
Feedback
Good job!
May 15, 2025
Thank you very much.
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I can't remember if it was a smart phone. I can't remember if it was a smart phone. I can't remember if it was a smart |
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Another two or three years later, I bought the Samsung Note series, like Note 4 or Note 5. Another two or three years later, I bought the Samsung Note series, like Note 4 or Another two or three years later, I bought one of the Samsung Note series, likely the Note 4 or Note 5. |
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I bought them at least one year after their release to get a bargain. I bought it Unless you bought more than one phone, the singular "it/its" is better. |
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The last Samsung smart phone I used was Galaxy S8. The last Samsung smart |
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In 2000, I bought my first mobile phone. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Its model was Nokia C5 - 03 and it cost 1200 CNY. Its model was Nokia C5 - 03 and it costed 1200 CNY. It |
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I thought it was a mobile phone with the best cost - performance. I thought it was a mobile phone with the best I thought it was a mobile phone with the best |
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I didn't have that much money, so my mother - in - law gave me 1000 CNY and I spent 200 CNY. I didn't have that much money, so my mother I didn't have that much money, so my mother |
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It was not a smart phone. It was not a smart |
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I could use it only to call and text. I could only use it This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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A few years later, I upgraded to a Samsung. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Its model was Galaxy S3.
To describe the model of a phone, it's more common to simply say "it is/was a _____", but "the model" is also okay. |
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After that, the phones can't function well. After that, the phones |
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My current smartphone is an iPhone. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I bought it in the summer of 2020. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It still works okay although sometimes it acts very slowly. It still works okay although sometimes it It still works okay although sometimes it |
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I bought it soon after its release, so it was a little expensive. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I feel Android phones can only be used for around three years. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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