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shiera

May 31, 2020

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My Memory

What if you found you lost your memory when you woke up?

I have experienced 10 year ago that I forgot my name when I woke up. I remembered other things but my name. It took five minutes to recall it.
I was worried maybe if I got dimentia.

I read a comic story Saturday night. That got the memory about that experience back. The story is like this.
A woman bought a baby from a broker. She enthusiastically raised up the baby to be a good young man. But the young man had an car accident and almost doomed.
The broker came to see him and went back to the spaceship. This broker is an alien. The alien prepared a new hardware, that is a human body which was produced by cloning of the young man, and then the alien input the backup data of the young man's memory to the body and changed the young man in a hospital for a new one.
The woman had tears of joy and lived with her son without any troubles from the car accident.

I thought when I couldn't remember only my name, the alien in charge of my area just forgot updating my memory.
Sometimes, when I wake up, I'm in good mood. Maybe the alien rewrites my data to check human behaviors and report it to the alien's boss?

Descartes said, “I think, therefore I am.”

I think, therefore I realize the alien properly updated my memory last night.
😄😄

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My Memory

What if you found you lost your memoryies when you woke up?

I have experienced 10Ten years ago that, I forgot my name when I woke up.

I remembered other things but not my name.

It took five minutes to recall it.

I was worried maybe if I gotthat maybe I had diementia.

I read a comic story Saturday night.

That got thebrought back my memory aboutof that experience back.

The story igoes like this.:

A woman bought a baby from a broker.

She enthusiastically raised up the baby to be a good young man.

But, the young man had anwas in a car accident and almost doomied.

The broker came to see him and went back to thehis spaceship.

Using "the" with something that you have not yet introduced is confusing because we have no point of reference for it.

This broker iwas an alien.

The alien prepared a new hardware, that is a human body which was produced by cloning of the young man, and then the alien input the backup data of the young man's memory to the body and chang. Finally, he switched the young man in athe hospital for awith the new one.

The woman hacried tears of joy and lived with her son, without any tho had no lasting proublems from the car accident.

I thought that when I couldn't remember only my name, the alien in charge of my area just forgot to updatinge my memory.

Sometimes, when I wake up, I'm in a good mood.

Maybe the alien rewrites my data to check human behaviors and reports it to the alien'his boss?

Descartes said, “I think, therefore I am.”

I think, therefore I realize the alien properly updated my memory last night.

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shiera

June 1, 2020

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Thank you for the corrections.

My Memory


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What if you found you lost your memory when you woke up?


What if you found you lost your memoryies when you woke up?

I have experienced 10 year ago that I forgot my name when I woke up.


I have experienced 10Ten years ago that, I forgot my name when I woke up.

I remembered other things but my name.


I remembered other things but not my name.

It took five minutes to recall it.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I was worried maybe if I got dimentia.


I was worried maybe if I gotthat maybe I had diementia.

I read a comic story Saturday night.


I read a comic story Saturday night.

That got the memory about that experience back.


That got thebrought back my memory aboutof that experience back.

The story is like this.


The story igoes like this.:

A woman bought a baby from a broker.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

She enthusiastically raised up the baby to be a good young man.


She enthusiastically raised up the baby to be a good young man.

But the young man had an car accident and almost doomed.


But, the young man had anwas in a car accident and almost doomied.

The broker came to see him and went back to the spaceship.


The broker came to see him and went back to thehis spaceship.

Using "the" with something that you have not yet introduced is confusing because we have no point of reference for it.

This broker is an alien.


This broker iwas an alien.

The alien prepared a new hardware, that is a human body which was produced by cloning of the young man, and then the alien input the backup data of the young man's memory to the body and changed the young man in a hospital for a new one.


The alien prepared a new hardware, that is a human body which was produced by cloning of the young man, and then the alien input the backup data of the young man's memory to the body and chang. Finally, he switched the young man in athe hospital for awith the new one.

The woman had tears of joy and lived with her son without any troubles from the car accident.


The woman hacried tears of joy and lived with her son, without any tho had no lasting proublems from the car accident.

I thought when I couldn't remember only my name, the alien in charge of my area just forgot updating my memory.


I thought that when I couldn't remember only my name, the alien in charge of my area just forgot to updatinge my memory.

Sometimes, when I wake up, I'm in good mood.


Sometimes, when I wake up, I'm in a good mood.

Maybe the alien rewrites my data to check human behaviors and report it to the alien's boss?


Maybe the alien rewrites my data to check human behaviors and reports it to the alien'his boss?

Descartes said, “I think, therefore I am.”


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I think, therefore I realize the alien properly updated my memory last night.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

😄😄


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