March 5, 2023
My memories in California
I had stayed in California for a month.
There are a lot of beautiful places, beaches and delicious foods so California is my favorite place.
I felt time passed by quickly…
I’d like to return there again!
My memories in California
I had stayed in California for a month.
There are a lot of beautiful places, beaches and delicious foods, so California is my favorite place.
I felt like the time passed by quickly…
I’d like to return therego back again!
March 7, 2023
Thank you so much!
My mMemories inof California
I had stayed in California for a month.
楽しそうです。
There are a lot of beautiful placetowns, beaches and delicious foods so California is my favorite place to be.
A beach can be a place, too, so I replaced "places" with "towns."
It felt as if time passed by so quickly…
I’d like to return therego back again!
This is more natural in the US.
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よかった！いい話です。よく出来ました！
March 5, 2023
ありがとうございます！
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I had stayed in California for a month. I 楽しそうです。 This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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There are a lot of beautiful places, beaches and delicious foods so California is my favorite place. There are a lot of beautiful A beach can be a place, too, so I replaced "places" with "towns." There are a lot of beautiful places, beaches and delicious foods, so California is my favorite place. |
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I felt time passed by quickly… It felt as if time passed by so quickly… I felt like the time passed by quickly… |
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I’d like to return there again! I’d like to This is more natural in the US. I’d like to |
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