Jan. 24, 2023
My Lunar New Year
I got Covid-19 after my boyfriend.
5 days of isolation is the policy in Taiwan, so I finally went home on Lunar New Year's Eve(January 21, 2023).
My family was afraid of me, I couldn't celebrate with them so I stayed in my bedroom.
My little sister told me a bad news just a moment ago, she had an itchy throat.
She has a date in 3 days, I feel terribly sorry if I transmit her...
My Lunar New Year
I got Covid-19 after my boyfriend did.
5Five days of isolation is the policy in Taiwan, so I finally went home on Lunar New Year's Eve (January 21, 2023).
My family was afraid of me, so I couldn't celebrate with them so Iand stayed in my bedroom instead.
My little sister told me a bad news just a moment ago,: she hads an itchy throat.
She has a date in 3 days, Ithree days so I will feel terribly sorry if I transmitted it to her...
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I'm sorry to hear this. I hope she feels better soon. Good work with the writing.
My Lunar New Year
I got Covid-19 after my boyfriend.
5 days of isolation is the policy in Taiwan, so I finally went home on Lunar New Year's Eve (January 21, 2023).
Add a space before the left parenthesis mark.
My family was afraid of me, so I couldn't celebrate with them soand I stayed in my bedroom.
My little sister told me asome bad news just a moment ago,: she hads an itchy throat.
She has a date in 3 days,. I will feel terribly sorry if I transmithave infected her...
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Best wishes to you and your family.
Feb. 1, 2023
Thank you. We feel better now. : )
My Lunar New Year
I got Covid-19 after my boyfriend.
5 days of isolation is the policy in Taiwan, so I finally went home on Lunar New Year's Eve(January 21, 2023).
My family was afraid of me,. I couldn't celebrate with them so I stayed in my bedroom.
My little sister toldgave me athe bad news just a moment ago, she hads an itchy throat.
- "give someone the (good/bad) news" is a common phrase
- I switched "had" to "has" because your sister presumably still has a sore throat when you wrote this entry. It sounds more natural.
She has a date in 3 days, I would feel terribly sorry if I transmithave infected her...
- I added "would" because it's still uncertain if your sister has been infected.
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I am very sorry to hear that. I hope you and your sister both make a speedy recovery.
Feb. 1, 2023
Thanks for explaining this to me. We almost fully recovered. ^^
I got Covid-19 after fromy boyfriend.
5 days of isolation is the policy in Taiwan, so I finally went home on Lunar New Year's Eve (January 21, 2023).
My family was afraid of me, so I couldn't celebrate with them soand I stayed in my bedroom.
My little sister told me asome bad news just a moment ago,: she had an itchy throat.
She has a date in 3 days, and I feel terribly sorry if I transmitted it to her...
Feb. 1, 2023
Thanks so much. ^^
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