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zaozao

Nov. 12, 2022

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I have been doing work out for 8 day consistently. It makes me feel really good. Not only for keeping fit but for keeping mental healthily, I’d better raise early and keep daily exercise.

And I watched a video course produced by a YouTuber named Luck, mainly about how to practice spoken English properly and efficiently. I could not agree with him more. He suggested us to use his methods, like four words exercise, variations and full paragraph variations. Hope I can stick to do these practices so that I can form the habit of using words, not just stop at knowing that word.

However, these exercises are challenging because I have to think over and over again that if put this or that word in the sentence is right and if it sounds natural. Of course, doing these practices has some advantages, like enabling me to cultivate the ability to think in English and providing me an opportunity to apply what I have learned to real life situations.


Thank you so much for correcting this! Appreciate it!

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My little diary

11.11

I have been doing working out for 8 day consistently.

It makes me feel really good.

Not only for keeping fit but for keeping mentally healthily, I’d better raise early and keep daily exercisey. I rise early and exercise daily.

And I watched a video course produced by a YouTuber named Luck, mainly about how to practice spoken English properly and efficiently.

Putting "and" at the start of a sentence is rarely done in written works, as it is often used to make compound sentences ( for example, I exercise daily and I saw a video from Luck). while in a conversation it might be alright if you are continuing a thought if you had been interrupted before.

Example:

J: I'm so hungry this morning!
H: oh, are you?
J: yes! Oh, and also I'd love some orange juice.

I hope that example is helpful.

I could not agree with him more.

He suggested us tothe use of his methods, like four words exercises, variations and full paragraph variations.

HI hope I can stick to do thesekeep practicesing so that I can form the habit of using words, and not just stop at knowing that word.

Edited for clarity.

However, these exercises are challenging because I have to think over and over again that if putwhether this or that word in the sentence is right and if it sounds natural.

I understand what you are saying, but this correction makes it sound more natural.

Of course, doing these practicexercises has some advantages, like enabling me to cultivate the ability to think in English and providing me an opportunity to apply what I have learned to real life situations.

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Great journal entry. You English is coming along wonderfully, I hope these exercises from Luck help you reach your goals!

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zaozao

Nov. 12, 2022

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And I watched a video course produced by a YouTuber named Luck, mainly about how to practice spoken English properly and efficiently.

Thank you very very much! I got it!

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zaozao

Nov. 12, 2022

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Really appreciate your help! Writing is a tough task for me, but I’ve been trying hard to improve my writing skills and I’ll keep practicing! Thank you very much!!

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I have been doing work out for 8 day consistently.


I have been doing working out for 8 day consistently.

It makes me feel really good.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Not only for keeping fit but for keeping mental healthily, I’d better raise early and keep daily exercise.


Not only for keeping fit but for keeping mentally healthily, I’d better raise early and keep daily exercisey. I rise early and exercise daily.

And I watched a video course produced by a YouTuber named Luck, mainly about how to practice spoken English properly and efficiently.


And I watched a video course produced by a YouTuber named Luck, mainly about how to practice spoken English properly and efficiently.

Putting "and" at the start of a sentence is rarely done in written works, as it is often used to make compound sentences ( for example, I exercise daily and I saw a video from Luck). while in a conversation it might be alright if you are continuing a thought if you had been interrupted before. Example: J: I'm so hungry this morning! H: oh, are you? J: yes! Oh, and also I'd love some orange juice. I hope that example is helpful.

I could not agree with him more.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

He suggested us to use his methods, like four words exercise, variations and full paragraph variations.


He suggested us tothe use of his methods, like four words exercises, variations and full paragraph variations.

Hope I can stick to do these practices so that I can form the habit of using words, not just stop at knowing that word.


HI hope I can stick to do thesekeep practicesing so that I can form the habit of using words, and not just stop at knowing that word.

Edited for clarity.

However, these exercises are challenging because I have to think over and over again that if put this or that word in the sentence is right and if it sounds natural.


However, these exercises are challenging because I have to think over and over again that if putwhether this or that word in the sentence is right and if it sounds natural.

I understand what you are saying, but this correction makes it sound more natural.

Of course, doing these practices has some advantages, like enabling me to cultivate the ability to think in English and providing me an opportunity to apply what I have learned to real life situations.


Of course, doing these practicexercises has some advantages, like enabling me to cultivate the ability to think in English and providing me an opportunity to apply what I have learned to real life situations.

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