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My little diary

Do work out a lot. I felt sore and ache all over from back to feet.
Yesterday I went to a suburban home with my friend, and when we came back to school, we immediately happened to catch a bus, which was extremely fortunate, because we have to waited for at least 10 minutes in the bus stop before. Interestingly, the bus driver was still the one who sent us to our destination in the morning.
In the afternoon, though the restaurant was crowded with people, most of them are students, we got into the restaurant without a hesitation. Waiting for about 20 minutes, our delicious dinner was on the table. I did not think the food was as good as it used to be, maybe I was just not hungry anymore after a long wait.
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My little diary

DoI worked out a lot.

I felt sore and achey all over from my back to my feet.

Yesterday I went to a suburban home with my friend, and when we came back to school, we immediately happened to catch a bus, which was extremely fortunate, because we have had to waited for at least 10 minutes inat the bus stop before.

Interestingly, the bus driver was still the one who shad drivent us to our destination in the morning.

In the afternoon, though the restaurant was crowded with people, most of them are students, we got into the restaurant without a hesitationwait.

Waiting foAfter about a 20 minutes wait, our delicious dinner was on the table.

I did not think the food was as good as it used to be, but maybe I was just not hungry anymore after a long wait.

Thank you for correcting.

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zaozao

Nov. 7, 2022

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My little diary

DoI worked out a lot.

I felt sore and ached all over from back to feethead to toe.

Yesterday I went to a suburban home with my friend, and when we cameon our way back to school, we immediately happened to catch a bus immediately, which was extremely fortunate, because we haved to waited for at least 10 minutes inat the bus stop before.

Interestingly, the bus driver was still ththe same one who shad takent us to our destination in the morning.

In the afternoon, though the restaurant was crowded with people, most of them awere students, and we got into the restaurant without a hesitation.delay.

WaitingAfter we waited for about 20 minutes, our delicious dinner was on the table.

I did not think the food was as good as it used to be, but maybe I was just not hungry anymore after athe long wait.

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Nov. 7, 2022

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Interestingly, the bus driver was still ththe same one who shad takent us to our destination in the morning.

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Yesterday I went to a suburban home with my friend, and when we cameon our way back to school, we immediately happened to catch a bus immediately, which was extremely fortunate, because we haved to waited for at least 10 minutes inat the bus stop before.

Thank you very very much. Oh I like the expression of “on the way”, but I really don’t know how to apply it to the sentence. Now I have a more clear understanding of this expression. Thank you again!

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Regarding “sent,” please see here: http://lang-8.com/tom/journals/294208682260544238212476002653516926714

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Oops, sorry, I didn’t realize you had to have an account to read that post. Never mind—please ignore it. :-)

DoI work out a lot.

I felt sore and ache all over from back to feethead to toe.

In American English we have an idiom that means everywhere in/on the body 'from head to toe.' This can mean hurting all over the body or to be dressed/covered in something all over.

Interestingly, the bus driver was stillalso the one who sent us to our destination in the morning.

In the afternoon, though, the restaurant was crowded with people, most of them awere students, we got into the restaurant. We went inside without a hesitation.

WaitingAfter we waited for about 20 minutes, our delicious dinner was on the table.

I did not think the food was as good as it used to be, maybe I was just not hungry anymore after a long waitwaiting so long.

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zaozao

Nov. 7, 2022

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Thank you for your corrections!!

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Do work out a lot.


DoI work out a lot.

DoI worked out a lot.

DoI worked out a lot.

I felt sore and ache all over from back to feet.


I felt sore and ache all over from back to feethead to toe.

In American English we have an idiom that means everywhere in/on the body 'from head to toe.' This can mean hurting all over the body or to be dressed/covered in something all over.

I felt sore and ached all over from back to feethead to toe.

I felt sore and achey all over from my back to my feet.

Yesterday I went to a suburban home with my friend, and when we came back to school, we immediately happened to catch a bus, which was extremely fortunate, because we have to waited for at least 10 minutes in the bus stop before.


Yesterday I went to a suburban home with my friend, and when we cameon our way back to school, we immediately happened to catch a bus immediately, which was extremely fortunate, because we haved to waited for at least 10 minutes inat the bus stop before.

Yesterday I went to a suburban home with my friend, and when we came back to school, we immediately happened to catch a bus, which was extremely fortunate, because we have had to waited for at least 10 minutes inat the bus stop before.

Interestingly, the bus driver was still the one who sent us to our destination in the morning.


Interestingly, the bus driver was stillalso the one who sent us to our destination in the morning.

Interestingly, the bus driver was still ththe same one who shad takent us to our destination in the morning.

Interestingly, the bus driver was still the one who shad drivent us to our destination in the morning.

In the afternoon, though the restaurant was crowded with people, most of them are students, we got into the restaurant without a hesitation.


In the afternoon, though, the restaurant was crowded with people, most of them awere students, we got into the restaurant. We went inside without a hesitation.

In the afternoon, though the restaurant was crowded with people, most of them awere students, and we got into the restaurant without a hesitation.delay.

In the afternoon, though the restaurant was crowded with people, most of them are students, we got into the restaurant without a hesitationwait.

Waiting for about 20 minutes, our delicious dinner was on the table.


WaitingAfter we waited for about 20 minutes, our delicious dinner was on the table.

WaitingAfter we waited for about 20 minutes, our delicious dinner was on the table.

Waiting foAfter about a 20 minutes wait, our delicious dinner was on the table.

I did not think the food was as good as it used to be, maybe I was just not hungry anymore after a long wait.


I did not think the food was as good as it used to be, maybe I was just not hungry anymore after a long waitwaiting so long.

I did not think the food was as good as it used to be, but maybe I was just not hungry anymore after athe long wait.

I did not think the food was as good as it used to be, but maybe I was just not hungry anymore after a long wait.

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