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galoarellano1987

Dec. 10, 2024

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My Little Daughter

Rarely I dedicate some letter to my daughter.
When my wife was pregnagt, I wanted my second child will be a male, but God and the destiny choosen give me a daughter.
The first days I was a little angry because I wanted a son. But with the time passage, an incredible connection between my daughter and me apears.

Today, 3 years after my daughter born, I can say with 100% of confident She is the love of my life.
Every laughly, every look from her make me feel the luckiest man in the world.

Every day I ask to God always to take care of my childrens.

Thanks for reading

God bless you.

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Rarely do I dedicate some letter towriting about my daughter.

I think this is what you meant

When my wife was pregnagnt, I wanted my second child willto be a maleboy, but God and the destiny choosen to give me a daughter.

Male is right, but it sounds odd and you usually say Boy for a child.

The first days I was a little angry because I wanted a son.

But with the time passagpassing of time, an incredible connection between my daughter and meI appearsed.

me changes to I, natives make this mistake all the time too!

Today, 3 years after my daughter was born, I can say with 100% of confidentce She is the love of my life.

Every laughly, and every look from her makes me feel like the luckiest man in the world.

Every day I ask to God to always to take care of my childrens.

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Beautiful! I'm expecting a little girl in Jan., this was very lovely to read!

Today, 3 years after my daughter born, I can say with 100% of confident She is the love of my life.


Today, 3 years after my daughter was born, I can say with 100% of confidentce She is the love of my life.

Every laughly, every look from her make me feel the luckiest man in the world.


Every laughly, and every look from her makes me feel like the luckiest man in the world.

Every day I ask to God always to take care of my childrens.


Every day I ask to God to always to take care of my childrens.

Thanks for reading God bless you.


A few time I dedicate some letter to my daughter.


My Little Daughter


When my wife was pregnagt, I wanted my second child will be a male, but God and the destiny choosen give me a daughter.


When my wife was pregnagnt, I wanted my second child willto be a maleboy, but God and the destiny choosen to give me a daughter.

Male is right, but it sounds odd and you usually say Boy for a child.

The first days I was a little angry because I wanted a son.


The first days I was a little angry because I wanted a son.

But with the time passage, an incredible connection between my daughter and me apears.


But with the time passagpassing of time, an incredible connection between my daughter and meI appearsed.

me changes to I, natives make this mistake all the time too!

Rarely I dedicate some letter to my daughter.


Rarely do I dedicate some letter towriting about my daughter.

I think this is what you meant

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