Dec. 29, 2020
My list
Today has been another slow, stressful, boring day. I wake up, I do all the normal stuff we all do (I think), and then I start doing all the homework. Firstly, I write a list with all the things I have to do, so after every homework, I can put a check next to every item on my list. Doing this makes me feel so good like I had accomplished a huge gold. It is a small one, but all together reflect how hard I worked during the day.
Secondly, I started doing the first item on my list thinking that this one is the easiest, but I'm WRONG. I got stuck and It took me probably 3 hours to finish it.
Now I see my list and everything seems so hard and exhausting that I don't want to do anything. All these small accomplishments seem too far away and the great feeling I was expecting to feel never comes.
Tomorrow I can do better, I could put a second check on my list and feel a little bit fulfilled.
I waoke up, I doid all the normal stuff we all do (I think), and then I started doing all themy homework.
Firstly, IWhen starting my homework, I first write a list with all the things I have to do, so a. After every homeworkassignment, I can then put a check next to everyan item on my list.
Doing this makes me feel so good like, as if I had accomplished a huge goald.
It is a small oneact, but alltaken together it reflects how hard I worked during the day.
Secondly, I started doing the first item on my list (thinking that this one iwas the easiest), but I'm was WRONG.
Now I see'm looking at my list and everything seems so hard and exhausting that I don't want to do anything.
All these small accomplishments seem too far away and the great feeling I was expecting to feel never coames.
Tomorrow I can do better,. I couldwill put a second check on my list and feel a little bit more fulfilled.
Feedback
Well written, make sure you're using the past tense instead of the present. I hope you feel better tomorrow!
Dec. 30, 2020
¡Gracias!
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My list |
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Today has been another slow, stressful, boring day. |
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I wake up, I do all the normal stuff we all do (I think), and then I start doing all the homework. I w |
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Firstly, I write a list with all the things I have to do, so after every homework, I can put a check next to every item on my list.
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Doing this makes me feel so good like I had accomplished a huge gold. Doing this makes me feel so good |
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It is a small one, but all together reflect how hard I worked during the day. It is a small |
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Secondly, I started doing the first item on my list thinking that this one is the easiest, but I'm WRONG. Second |
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I got stuck and It took me probably 3 hours to finish it. |
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Now I see my list and everything seems so hard and exhausting that I don't want to do anything. Now I |
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All these small accomplishments seem too far away and the great feeling I was expecting to feel never comes. All these small accomplishments seem too far away and the great feeling I was expecting to feel never c |
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Tomorrow I can do better, I could put a second check on my list and feel a little bit fulfilled. Tomorrow I can do better |
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