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Migueling

Jan. 21, 2022

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My life's goals

I consider that one of the most important things in the life are goals, in my particular case sometimes these goals dont look up toward same direction.
My life's goal are: To have a family, to have a succesful profesional carrer, to have some economics stability.

Regard to have a family, I'd love to spend most time possible with my loved ones including parents, wife, children, brothers, to achieve this target it's necessary earn a decent living, in fact for these reason I gratuated as Engineer, First of all because Engeneering is what I most love to doing, It is my passion and secondly because it's a tool that allow me earn a decent living.

And the other hand, I'm currently lving in a place where at the moment its impossible make a real my goals for some reasons such as: I have to work a lot of hour to I be able to save money, It's a place unsafety to my children that I still no have but I hope to have, I don't like the mood in which It living here.

For those reasons, I consider strongly move to a place in which I can achieve my goals and where there will be better condition that I living currently, for this I started the journal tipying that sometimes our goals don't look uo toward same direction, but the best of all, We ever will have the possibility of look for our dream and strugle for them.

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I consider that one of the most important things in the life are goals, in my particular case sometimes these goals dont look up towardhead in the same direction.

My life's goal are: To have a family, to have a successful professional carrer,er and to have some economicsfinancial stability.

RWith regard to haveing a family, I'd love to spend mostas much time as possible with my loved ones including my parents, wife, children, and brothers, t. To achieve this target it's necessary earn a decent living, in fact for theseis reason I gratduated as an Engineer,. First of all because Eengeineering is what I most love to doing, I it is my passion and secondly because it's a tool that allows me earn a decent living.

And the other hand, I'm currently living in a place where at the moment its impossible make a realto achieve my goals for some reasons such as: I have to work a lot of hours to I be able to save money, It' and it’s a place unsafety to for my children that I still no have but I hope to have,. I have to do this but I have hope it will change. I don't like the moodenvironment in which It am living here.

For those reasons, I am considering strongly to move to a place in which I can achieve my goals and where there will be better condition that I living currently, fliving conditions. For this I started theis journal tipywriting that sometimes our goals don't look uo towardhead in same direction, but the best of all, Wwe ever willwill always have the possibility of look for our dream and struglive for them.

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A complex idea that you put across well. My suggestion would be to make your sentences shorter. 👍

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Migueling

Jan. 22, 2022

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Thanks a lot, I so appreciate it. I took down every corrections. :D

I considerthink that one of the most important things in the life are goals,; in my particular case, sometimes these goals dont look up toward same directionare not easy.

I'm not sure what you mean by "don't look up toward same direction." Maybe there is another way of phrasing this?

My life's goals are: T to have a family, to have a successful professional carreer, and to have some economics stability.

RIn regard to haveing a family, I'd love to spend the most time possible with my loved ones, including my parents, wife, children, and brothers, t. To achieve this target, it' is necessary to earn a decent living, i. In fact, for theseis reason I gratduated as Ean engineer, First of all because. Engeineering is what I most love to doing, I; it is my passion and secondly because it's. It's also a tool that allows me to earn a decent living.

These statements should be separate sentences.
I also cleaned up the grammar a bit.

And on the other hand, I'm currently living in a place where at the momenit its impossible to make a real my goals for some reasons such as:a reality at the moment. I have to work a lot of hours to I be able to save money, It's aand this place is unsafety to my for children that. I still do not have any, but I hope to have,, and I don't like the mood in which Itatmosphere of living here.

These statements should also be separated into multiple sentences.
I re-worded the first sentence to sound more natural. And I also edited some spelling and grammar mistakes.

For thoese reasons, I consider stronglyam strongly considering a move to a place in whichwhere I can achieve my goals, and where there will be better conditions that I have living currently, for thishere. I started theis journal tipyping that sometimes our goals don't look uop toward same direction, but the. However, best of all, We ever willwe have the possibility of looking for our dreams and struglegling for them.

These statements should also be separated into multiple sentences.

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Well done! I hope you can achieve your goals one day.

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Migueling

Jan. 22, 2022

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Hi kay!!! Thanks so much for your corrections, I appreciate them so much, I already took them down.

I consider that one of the most important things in the life aris to have goals, i. In my particular case sometimes, these goals don't look up towardall point in the same direction.

My life's goal are: To have a family, to have a successful professional carreer, to have some economics stability.

RWith regards to haveing a family, I'd love to spend most time possible with my loved ones, including my parents, wife, children, and brothers, t. To achieve this target it's necessary for me to earn a decent living, in fact for these reason I gratduated as Ean engineer, First of all because E. While engeineering is what I most love to doing, It is my passion and secondly because it'sreally my passion, for me, it is also a tool that will allow me earn a decent living.

I just made some corrections to simplify it a bit, that way your meaning is a bit more obvious.

AndOn the other hand, I'm currently living in a place where, at the moment, it is impossible to make a real my goals for somea reality, for reasons such as: I have to work a lot of hours to I be able to save money,. It's a place unsafety to my children that I still no have but I hope to have, I don't like the mood in which It living here. would rather live in a place which is safer for the children that I hope to have one day.

I wasn't too sure of the meaning in your second sentence, hopefully my correction makes sense?

For those reasons, I considerwould strongly prefer to be able to move to a place in which I can achieve my goals and where there will be better living condition that I living currently, for thiss for myself, and for my future family. I started the journal tipby saying that sometimes our goals don't look uo towardall point in the same direction, but the bemost of all, We ever will have the possibility of look for our dream and strugle for them.important thing of all, is that we are all capable of dreaming, and in struggling for our dreams, we can make them a reality.

Again, wasn't quite sure of your meaning, but made some suggestions along what I think you were trying to say.

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Well done !

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Migueling

Jan. 22, 2022

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Hello vitasoyboi, thanks a lot for your suggestions. I appreciate them so much..

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Migueling

Jan. 23, 2022

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AndOn the other hand, I'm currently living in a place where, at the moment, it is impossible to make a real my goals for somea reality, for reasons such as: I have to work a lot of hours to I be able to save money,. It's a place unsafety to my children that I still no have but I hope to have, I don't like the mood in which It living here. would rather live in a place which is safer for the children that I hope to have one day.

Your correction is better than mine.. Thanks a lot.

My life's goal are: To have a family, to have a succesful profesional carrer, to have some economics stability.


My life's goal are: To have a family, to have a successful professional carreer, to have some economics stability.

My life's goals are: T to have a family, to have a successful professional carreer, and to have some economics stability.

My life's goal are: To have a family, to have a successful professional carrer,er and to have some economicsfinancial stability.

My life's goals


I consider that one of the most important things in the life are goals, in my particular case sometimes these goals dont look up toward same direction.


I consider that one of the most important things in the life aris to have goals, i. In my particular case sometimes, these goals don't look up towardall point in the same direction.

I considerthink that one of the most important things in the life are goals,; in my particular case, sometimes these goals dont look up toward same directionare not easy.

I'm not sure what you mean by "don't look up toward same direction." Maybe there is another way of phrasing this?

I consider that one of the most important things in the life are goals, in my particular case sometimes these goals dont look up towardhead in the same direction.

Regard to have a family, I'd love to spend most time possible with my loved ones including parents, wife, children, brothers, to achieve this target it's necessary earn a decent living, in fact for these reason I gratuated as Engineer, First of all because Engeneering is what I most love to doing, It is my passion and secondly because it's a tool that allow me earn a decent living.


RWith regards to haveing a family, I'd love to spend most time possible with my loved ones, including my parents, wife, children, and brothers, t. To achieve this target it's necessary for me to earn a decent living, in fact for these reason I gratduated as Ean engineer, First of all because E. While engeineering is what I most love to doing, It is my passion and secondly because it'sreally my passion, for me, it is also a tool that will allow me earn a decent living.

I just made some corrections to simplify it a bit, that way your meaning is a bit more obvious.

RIn regard to haveing a family, I'd love to spend the most time possible with my loved ones, including my parents, wife, children, and brothers, t. To achieve this target, it' is necessary to earn a decent living, i. In fact, for theseis reason I gratduated as Ean engineer, First of all because. Engeineering is what I most love to doing, I; it is my passion and secondly because it's. It's also a tool that allows me to earn a decent living.

These statements should be separate sentences. I also cleaned up the grammar a bit.

RWith regard to haveing a family, I'd love to spend mostas much time as possible with my loved ones including my parents, wife, children, and brothers, t. To achieve this target it's necessary earn a decent living, in fact for theseis reason I gratduated as an Engineer,. First of all because Eengeineering is what I most love to doing, I it is my passion and secondly because it's a tool that allows me earn a decent living.

And the other hand, I'm currently lving in a place where at the moment its impossible make a real my goals for some reasons such as: I have to work a lot of hour to I be able to save money, It's a place unsafety to my children that I still no have but I hope to have, I don't like the mood in which It living here.


AndOn the other hand, I'm currently living in a place where, at the moment, it is impossible to make a real my goals for somea reality, for reasons such as: I have to work a lot of hours to I be able to save money,. It's a place unsafety to my children that I still no have but I hope to have, I don't like the mood in which It living here. would rather live in a place which is safer for the children that I hope to have one day.

I wasn't too sure of the meaning in your second sentence, hopefully my correction makes sense?

And on the other hand, I'm currently living in a place where at the momenit its impossible to make a real my goals for some reasons such as:a reality at the moment. I have to work a lot of hours to I be able to save money, It's aand this place is unsafety to my for children that. I still do not have any, but I hope to have,, and I don't like the mood in which Itatmosphere of living here.

These statements should also be separated into multiple sentences. I re-worded the first sentence to sound more natural. And I also edited some spelling and grammar mistakes.

And the other hand, I'm currently living in a place where at the moment its impossible make a realto achieve my goals for some reasons such as: I have to work a lot of hours to I be able to save money, It' and it’s a place unsafety to for my children that I still no have but I hope to have,. I have to do this but I have hope it will change. I don't like the moodenvironment in which It am living here.

For those reasons, I consider strongly move to a place in which I can achieve my goals and where there will be better condition that I living currently, for this I started the journal tipying that sometimes our goals don't look uo toward same direction, but the best of all, We ever will have the possibility of look for our dream and strugle for them.


For those reasons, I considerwould strongly prefer to be able to move to a place in which I can achieve my goals and where there will be better living condition that I living currently, for thiss for myself, and for my future family. I started the journal tipby saying that sometimes our goals don't look uo towardall point in the same direction, but the bemost of all, We ever will have the possibility of look for our dream and strugle for them.important thing of all, is that we are all capable of dreaming, and in struggling for our dreams, we can make them a reality.

Again, wasn't quite sure of your meaning, but made some suggestions along what I think you were trying to say.

For thoese reasons, I consider stronglyam strongly considering a move to a place in whichwhere I can achieve my goals, and where there will be better conditions that I have living currently, for thishere. I started theis journal tipyping that sometimes our goals don't look uop toward same direction, but the. However, best of all, We ever willwe have the possibility of looking for our dreams and struglegling for them.

These statements should also be separated into multiple sentences.

For those reasons, I am considering strongly to move to a place in which I can achieve my goals and where there will be better condition that I living currently, fliving conditions. For this I started theis journal tipywriting that sometimes our goals don't look uo towardhead in same direction, but the best of all, Wwe ever willwill always have the possibility of look for our dream and struglive for them.

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