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My Life, My Family and My Future Plans

Hello my name is Fatma
I want to learn English and I want to be English teacher
I will gone to abroad and my favorite vocation Italy
Last summer I went to Antalya my family
My dad work at a tourism
He is a driver
My mom is a housewife
She is very beautiful and sweet.
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My Life, My Family and My Future Plans

Hello, my name is Fatma
. I want to learn English and I want to be/become an English teacher
I will gone to
. I have been/traveled abroad and my favorite vocationcountry so far is Italy.
Last summer, I went to Antalya with my family.
My dad works at a tourism
company. He is a driver.
My mom is a housewife.
She is very beautiful and sweet.

We typically say that we want to "become" a certain profession, if it is for a job that requires study. (I want to become a doctor, lawyer, engineer, teacher...)
You can say that you have been TO a country (or place), or you can say that you have been or traveled abroad: I've been to New York. I've traveled abroad.

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Hello my name is Fatma I want to learn English and I want to be English teacher I will gone to abroad and my favorite vocation Italy Last summer I went to Antalya my family My dad work at a tourism He is a driver My mom is a housewife She is very beautiful and sweet.


Hello, my name is Fatma
. I want to learn English and I want to be/become an English teacher
I will gone to
. I have been/traveled abroad and my favorite vocationcountry so far is Italy.
Last summer, I went to Antalya with my family.
My dad works at a tourism
company. He is a driver.
My mom is a housewife.
She is very beautiful and sweet.

We typically say that we want to "become" a certain profession, if it is for a job that requires study. (I want to become a doctor, lawyer, engineer, teacher...) You can say that you have been TO a country (or place), or you can say that you have been or traveled abroad: I've been to New York. I've traveled abroad.

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