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Her room was sparkling tidy and clean,clean and tidy. There was a Panasonic DVD player and some popular CDs and DVDs were put beside a double bed.

I had a good sleep on the soft bed,. I hadn't enjoyed such a comfortable feeling since I had left my hometown.

The next day, we carefully made up the bed and left a message expressing our appreciation thenand left.

I have never talked to her again, but I saw her once, in the bank, speaking with my colleague (athe young man who was 4 years older than me and who slept on her bed with me that night) in the bank.

She letmade me feel the warmth fromwelcome in SZ.

A special job was waiting for me, my boss would never regret hiring me and where the university certificate was not thea prerequisite. My boss would never regret hiring me.

BThe boss only cares whether you can make money or not.

The first night in SZ downtown SZ was interesting.

We usually say it in this order.

Diana found a room for us, and she gave us a phone number and then went away.

The lady asked us to go to her house; however, when we reached. When we arrived at the address, however, she couldn't open the door for us because she couldn't find the key to our room.

The lady looked at us with some embarrassment and said, "You are theThis is your first time in SZ,. You do not look like bad guys.

Both of you can sleep in my room and. I am going to my friend's house tonight because it'this is my fault.

It's a double bed,. I think it's big enough for you two.

She was working at a bank nearby, was around 30 years old, and was single as she said, with charming wavy hair and a warm smile that left me havewith a deep memory even now.

I'm not sure it's okay to describe "wavy hair" as "charming" but I like it so I'm leaving it alone.

Her room was sparkling tidy and clean, and tidy. A Panasonic DVD player and some popular CDs and DVDs were put beside a double bed.

We use "sparkling clean" but not "sparkling tidy."

I had a good sleep on theat soft bed,. I hadn't enjoyed such a comfortable feeling since I left my hometown.

The next day, we carefully made up the bed and, left a message expressing our appreciation and then left.

I never talked to her again, but saw her once speaking with my colleague (a young man who was 4 years older than meI who slept on her bed with me that night) in the bank.

She let me feel the warmth ofrom SZ.

いいですね。

A special job was waiting for me, m. My boss would never regret hiring me and the university certificate was not thea prerequisite.

BThe boss only cares whether you can make money or not.

The first night in SZ downtown SZ was interesting.

Diana found a room for us, and s. She gave us a phone number and then went away.

The lady looked at us with some embarrassment and said, "You are theIt's your first time in SZ, you do not look like bad guys.

She was working at a bank nearby, around 30 years old, single as she said, with charming wavy hair and a warm smile that left me have a deep memory even now.

Her room was sparkling tidy and clean, a. A Panasonic DVD player and some popular CDs and DVDs were put beside a double bed.

I had a good sleep on the soft bed,. I hadn't enjoyed such a comfortable feeling since I left my hometown.

The next day, we carefully made up the bed and left a message expressing our appreciation, then left.

I never talked to her again, but saw her once in the bank, speaking with my colleague (a young man who was 4 years older than me who slept on her bed with me that night) in the bank.

Your version is still correct but it sounds a little more natural like this!