When we went through the aisledown the corridor of the first floor inof the Worker House, some bad smells letmade me feel uncomfortable, with the lights were not bright enough, and some dirty water with scraps under my feet.

As soon as I geot into his dormitory, I was shocked at the gate for a while.

I really don't want to write it out here, because I don't want foreigners to see today's article.

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I saw it, however, and it was a true scene before me in 1996 in a workers' dormitory in a big toy factory from Hong Kong.

Are you feeling cold at night? "

The room was filled with three to five big straw mats, some worsted (?) quilts put under the mats, t. They were all on the ground, no bed, and a bare bulb hanging down from the center of the ceiling.

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The room was filled with three to five big straw mats with some quilts which were in worse shape put under the mats. They were all on the ground, no bed, and a bare bulb hanging down from the center of the ceiling.

He answered with a wry smile:, "We are OK, here arewith about 10 roommates recently,lately. It's not too cold at night, because we warm each other.

Anyway, it's cheap, and I know your living condition ins at the Staff House isare much better."

I will never gowent into their room again,. I was scared by the straw mats, t. They were not Japanese-style tatami, which was but were similar to theose in rooms in some prisons in my mind.

I grew up in the city, so I couldn't imagine that this could be a real image in my mind unless someone showed me thea picture.

AreDon't you feeling cold at night? "

I willould never go into their room again,. I was scared by the straw mats, theywhich were not Japanese-style tatami, which wasbut similar to the room in some prisons in my mindmy mental image of some prison rooms.

"I would never go into their room again" means you never went into it again. Using "I would" is a narrative device that draws the reader into the moment (the time) of the story.

"I will" means now (today) you don't plan to go in again.

One afternoon, a colleague asked me to go together with him to his room.

When we went through the aislehallway of the first floor in the Worker House, some bad smells letmade me feel uncomfortable, with the lights were not bright enough, and there was some dirty water with scraps under my feet.

"scraps" is unclear. Scraps of what? Maybe you mean garbage, debris, food, crumbs, something else.

"The cleaner comes here every three days, no way.,"

Not sure what you mean to say here, especially with the "no way" at the end. Maybe you mean "There is no way that the cleaner actually comes every three days as he's supposed to" or "The cleaner only comes every three days" or Can you believe that the cleaner only comes every three days?"

Hhe said helplessly.

This is part of the previous sentence.

As soon as I geot into his dormitory, I was room, I stood shocked at the gatentrance for a while.

What I saw it, however, was a true scene before me in 1996 in a workers' dormitory in a big Hong Kong toy factory from Hong Kong.

Are you feeling cold at night? "

The room was filled with three to five big straw mats, some worstbad quilts put under the mats, they were all on the ground, no bed, a bulb hanging down from the center of the ceiling.

He answered with a wry smile:, "We are OK, there are about 10 roommates recat the momently, not too cold at night, we warm each other.

Anyway, it's cheap, I know your living conditions in the Staff House isare much better."

"Living conditions" is usually plural.

I will never go into their room again, I was scared by the straw mats, theywhich were not Japanese-style tatami, which wasbut similar to the room in some prisons in my mindmy mental image of some prison rooms.

I grew up in the city, I c and wouldn't imagine this could be a real image in my mind unless show me thehave been able to imagine this was true without being shown a picture.