Feb. 12, 2023
I deleted this entry three days ago after 30 minutes I posted on this website, as I am afraid some people might feel it not comfortable. After ruminating sometimes for days, I decided to submit it again. Since I am telling a true experience that happened a long time ago, tourism had been improving much over 20 years.
The third I did stunning and amazed them was "How to sell a clay portrait".
The man was molted of clay and represented the first emperor in ancient China, we usually gave some stories about this powerful man to attract guests, our goal was to persuade them to buy some other expensive jade, man-made crafts, or expensive paintings. No one care such a small volume of a 20cm tall clay man. They piled up on the ground same as the coin album with thick dust in the warehouse.
I creatively told customers, "Since he was the first most powerful man in China over two thousand years, the archaeologist has found many officials and even some common people regard him as a worship totem symbolizing a power that would belong to you in the future." I admit that's total bullshit because we did not respect the truth, however, the reality was we only cared about sale volume.
Many guests said they worshiped for wealth, health, and peaceful family before, but never heard of this kind of Power Totem. They were soon attracted and glad to buy this clay portrait man as a souvenir which only cost 100 HKD ($HK) for each. I believe some of them will put it in a place to bless them to gain a conquering power and get a job promoted. I bless them, too.
One day, I heard my two bosses discuss why I sold so well though my English was not the best. The final reason was also interesting and ridiculous.
My Life in SZ (17) - How to Work
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I bless them, too.
One day, I heard my two bosses discuss why I sold so well though my English was not the best.
The final reason was also interesting and ridiculous.
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My Life in SZ (17) - How to Work
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After ruminating sometimeson it for days, I decided to submit it again.
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No one cares about such a small volume of a 20cm tall clay man.
They piled up on the ground in the same way as the coin album covered with thick dust in the warehouse.
I creatively told customers, "Since he was the first, most powerful man in China over two thousand years ago, the archaeologist has found many officials and even some common people regard him as a worship totem symbolizing a power that would belong to you in the future."
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Many guests said they worshipped for wealth, health, and a peaceful family before, but never heard of this kind of Power Totem.
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I bless them, too.
One day, I heard my two bosses discuss why I sold so well thoughdespite my English was notnot being the best.
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Your writing is good! I would advise you work on the syntax to make your sentences sound more natural
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