My Life in SZ (17) - The Boss's Comments

Some of my colleagues' English was much more fluent than mine, even t. Three of them even passed the TEM-8, which stands for English Majors-Band 8, andwhich shows their English ability was at a high level.

It's not surpriseing for a university student to acquire a TEM-8 certificate nowadays, however, it was not the case in 1996.

Sister Wang asked Diana, "Why is A-Ben's (Tthey called me A-Ben) sales volume so high?

His English is not the best, so why do customers trust him?

ADiana, another boss Diana, answered, "I have noticed this recently,. I think maybe there are three reasons.

First, he is patient and never stops chattering about the products andso he seems informative to customers, which lets them get some interesting stuff to think about.

Second, His English is not the best, and withhas a strong local accent, yet it's acceptable because all of us have a different levels of accents.

Third, he wears a pair of myopia glasses withfor myopia which has a big black frame, which let so it makes him look very honest.

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As time passed, some of us including me gradually coame to realize why my boss - s, Sister Wang, had warned us that we would feel bored into some extent if we worked here for over three months.

Some of my colleagues' English was much more fluent than mine, and even three of them passed TEM-8, which. This stands for English Majors-Band 8, and shows that their English ability is at a high level.

Try to keep the amount of independent clauses low so that the sentences are not run-ons

It's not a surprise for a university student to acquire a TEM-8 certificate nowadays, however, ithat was not the case in 1996.

Sister Wang asked Diana, "Why is A-Ben's (They call me A-Ben) sales volume so high?

His English is not the best,; why do customers trust him?

Another boss Diana answered Diana, "I have noticed this recently,. I think maybe there armay be three reasons.

If Wang asks Diana a question, then either Diana answers or another boss answers Diana's question.

First, he is patient and never stops chattering about the products and he seems informative to customers, which lets them get some interesting stuff to think about.

Note that 'chattering' has a negative connotation. Chattering is usually seen as something negative to do.

Secondly, Hhis English is not the best, and withhe has a strong local accent, yet it's acceptable because all of us have a different level of accent.

Third, he wears a pair of myopia glasses with a big black frame, which letmake him look very honest.

As time passed, some of us including me gradually coame to realize why my boss - sister Wang had warned us that we would feel bored in some extent if we worked here over three months.

come- came to agree with 'passed'