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piggy

April 7, 2022

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MY LIFE

I think my life is terrible,not beacuse others,is myself.I always want to play,so I used my time of studying to paly.Sometimes.Oh,my God,I have many friends,but I still fell along.

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I think my life is terrible, not beacause of others,is but because of myself. I always want to play, so I used my time of studyingstudy time to palay. Sometimes. Oh, my God, I have many friends, but I still fell alongbehind.

You should put a space after commas and periods. Not sure what you meant by "fell along" so I took a guess.

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Don't spend all your time playing games, fun as that might be. Good luck with your studies.

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piggy

April 7, 2022

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I think my life is terrible, not beacause of others,is but because of myself. I always want to play, so I used my time of studyingstudy time to palay. Sometimes. Oh, my God, I have many friends, but I still fell alongbehind.

Yes, I want to wrrit ”feel alone“, not "fell along" ,haha, now I think I am stupid. try my best to change, okey, thank you.

MY LIFE


I think my life is terrible,not beacuse others,is myself.I always want to play,so I used my time of studying to paly.Sometimes.Oh,my God,I have many friends,but I still fell along.


I think my life is terrible, not beacause of others,is but because of myself. I always want to play, so I used my time of studyingstudy time to palay. Sometimes. Oh, my God, I have many friends, but I still fell alongbehind.

You should put a space after commas and periods. Not sure what you meant by "fell along" so I took a guess.

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