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Yazgul

July 23, 2025

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My library routine

I've come to the library. I come library everyday except Monday because the library closes on Monday. Also, I usually prepare my meals at home this is healthier because I've reflux so I must avoid eat packaged food and I must to do GERD diet. I usually study English and improve my project on software and read book this is my study routine. By the way I've been reading Dostoyevsky's The Double. Have you read this book? If you have, did you like it?... I hope you can give me feedback to how to I make these sentences more naturally and suggest alternatives modals or sentences.


Kütüphaneye geldim. Pazartasi günleri hariç her gün kütüphaneye geliyorum çünkü pazartesi günleri kütüphane kapalı oluyor. Ayrıca genelde öğünlerimi kendim hazırlıyorum, bu daha sağlıklı çünkü reflüm var, bu yüzen paketli gıdalar tüketmekten kaçınıyorum ve GERD diyeti yapmam lazım. Kütüphanede genelde İngilizce çalışıyorum ve yazılımda kendi projemi geliştiriyorum ve kitap okuyorum, bu benim çalışma rutinim. Bu arada Dostoyevski'nin Öteki itabını okuyorum. Bu kitabı daha önce okumuş muydun? Okuduysan, sevmiş miydin? Umarım Bana bu cümleleri nasıl daha doğal kurabileceğimi ve alternatif modal veya cümleleler için geri bildirim verebilirsin.

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My lLibrary rRoutine

All words in a title are generally capitalised.

I've come to the library.

I come to the library everyday except Mondays because the library closes on Mondays.

(1) "Monday" (singular) would refer to a specific Monday in a particular week. If referring to Mondays in general, the plural form would be used.
(2) Also, just take note that using "come" implies that you are writing this in the library. If you are not, we would use "go".

Also, I usually prepare my meals at home t. This is healthier because I've reflux, so I must avoid eating packaged food and I must to dofollow a GERD diet.

Slightly rephrased and restructured your original sentence so that it sounds more natural. The phrase is "follow a diet".

I usually study English and improve my project on software, work on my software projects and read books: this is my study routine.

Replaced the first "and" with a comma to avoid excessive use of the word, which may cause the sentence to sound stiff. I also made other minor adjustments.

By the way, I've been reading Dostoyevsky's The Double.

A comma generally comes after the phrase "by the way". It sounds more natural this way.

Have you read this book?

If you have, did you like it?...

We do not place ellipses after punctuation like this. If you do want to use them, they should come before: "If you have, did you like it...?

I hope you can give me feedback ton how to II can make these sentences (sound) more naturally and suggest alternatives modals or sentences.

The phrase is "feedback on (something)".

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Yazgul

July 30, 2025

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Thank you for your feedback.
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Yazgul

July 30, 2025

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- I was at the library when I wrote that so I did use "come".
- I'll use "follow a diet" from now on.
Thank you aagain

My library routine

I've comgone to the library.

It's really unclear what you're trying to say here, but here are a few ideas for what it could be:

"I've gone to the library." = you've been there before (generally implies it's not very frequent)
"I go to the library" = you go there regularly
"I'm at the library" = you were there while writing this

I comgo to the library every day, except Monday, because the library is closes on Monday.d.

Also, I usually prepare my meals at home t. This is healthier because I' have reflux, so I must avoid eating packaged food and I must to dofollow a GERD diet.

When saying "I have" to mean you possess something, you can't make it into a contraction (I've). Sometimes native speakers will say this when speaking informally, but it's never written that way

I usually study English and improve my project onwork on my software project, and read books- this is my study routine.

By the way, I've been reading Dostoyevsky's "The Double."

Have you read this book?

If you have, did you like it?...

I hope you can give me feedback ton how to I make these sentences more naturally and suggest alternatives modaels or sentences.

Feedback

Great job! It's generally easy to understand what you're saying, I just made a few grammar corrections and tried to make things sound more natural. Good luck :)

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Yazgul

July 30, 2025

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Thank you for your feedback.
I were there while writing this. That's why I did use "present perfect". Thanks, I'll use "I'm at the library" next time.

My library routine


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My lLibrary rRoutine

All words in a title are generally capitalised.

I've come to the library.


I've comgone to the library.

It's really unclear what you're trying to say here, but here are a few ideas for what it could be: "I've gone to the library." = you've been there before (generally implies it's not very frequent) "I go to the library" = you go there regularly "I'm at the library" = you were there while writing this

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I come library everyday except Monday because the library closes on Monday.


I comgo to the library every day, except Monday, because the library is closes on Monday.d.

I come to the library everyday except Mondays because the library closes on Mondays.

(1) "Monday" (singular) would refer to a specific Monday in a particular week. If referring to Mondays in general, the plural form would be used. (2) Also, just take note that using "come" implies that you are writing this in the library. If you are not, we would use "go".

Also, I usually prepare my meals at home this is healthier because I've reflux so I must avoid eat packaged food and I must to do GERD diet.


Also, I usually prepare my meals at home t. This is healthier because I' have reflux, so I must avoid eating packaged food and I must to dofollow a GERD diet.

When saying "I have" to mean you possess something, you can't make it into a contraction (I've). Sometimes native speakers will say this when speaking informally, but it's never written that way

Also, I usually prepare my meals at home t. This is healthier because I've reflux, so I must avoid eating packaged food and I must to dofollow a GERD diet.

Slightly rephrased and restructured your original sentence so that it sounds more natural. The phrase is "follow a diet".

I usually study English and improve my project on software and read book this is my study routine.


I usually study English and improve my project onwork on my software project, and read books- this is my study routine.

I usually study English and improve my project on software, work on my software projects and read books: this is my study routine.

Replaced the first "and" with a comma to avoid excessive use of the word, which may cause the sentence to sound stiff. I also made other minor adjustments.

By the way I've been reading Dostoyevsky's The Double.


By the way, I've been reading Dostoyevsky's "The Double."

By the way, I've been reading Dostoyevsky's The Double.

A comma generally comes after the phrase "by the way". It sounds more natural this way.

Have you read this book?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

If you have, did you like it?...


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

If you have, did you like it?...

We do not place ellipses after punctuation like this. If you do want to use them, they should come before: "If you have, did you like it...?

I hope you can give me feedback to how to I make these sentences more naturally and suggest alternatives modals or sentences.


I hope you can give me feedback ton how to I make these sentences more naturally and suggest alternatives modaels or sentences.

I hope you can give me feedback ton how to II can make these sentences (sound) more naturally and suggest alternatives modals or sentences.

The phrase is "feedback on (something)".

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