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May 11, 2024

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My lesson taught by molar filling

On my way home, I dropped in at the local Japanese restaurant. While having strawberry ice cream for dessert, I felt something hard in my mouth. Seeing it as just a seed of strawberry, I swallowed it without much thought. Getting home, however, I realized it had been a filling of molar.

The next morning, when I was preparing breakfast, I just got stuck, looking at the green pepper in sauteed vegetables. I thought, "I can't bite this huge one without an unstuffed molar!"

After I finished slicing them into smaller pieces, one of my friends came up to my mind. She sometimes brings to us her homemade meals like simmered yellowtail with daikon (Japanese radish) or chilled Chinese noodles with various toppings. I remembered all the ingredients in them were cut small. At first, I thought she was just a meticulous person, but later it turned out that she wore perfect dentures. When I gave her a hard rice cracker, I was told that I needed more sensitivity. On top of that, during a meal, she looks like brooding about something and never stuffs her face with food. Finally, I felt like I got to the answer.

My own experience of losing a molar filling has allowed me to understand the pain of others. The hole in the molar taught me my lesson the hard way. Letting this be a moral, I might as well keep away from a dentist for the time being.

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My lLessons taught by a molar filling

I think this title sounds hilarious

On my way home, I dropped in atby the local Japanese restaurant.

While having strawberry ice cream for dessert, I felt something hard in my mouth.

SeeAssuming it was just a seed of strawberry seed, I swallowed it without much thought.

GettingWhen I got home, however, I realized it had been a fillingone of my molar fillings.

The next morning, whenas I was preparing breakfast and sauteing vegetables, I just got stuck, looking at the green pepper in sauteed vegetablesamong them.

I thought, "I can't bite this huge onepepper without an unstuffed molarmy molar filling!"

After I finished slicing them vegetables into smaller pieces, one of my friends came up to myto mind.

She sometimes brings to us herus homemade meals, like simmered yellowtail with daikon (Japanese radish) or chilled Chinese noodles with various toppings.

I remembered all the ingredients in them were cut smallfinely.

At first, I thought she was just a meticulous person, but later it turned out that she wore perfect dentures.

On top of that, during a meal, she always looksed like brooding aboutover something and never stuffsed her face with food.

Finally, I felt like I got to the answsolved a mystery.

My own experience of losing a molar filling has allowhelped me to understand the pain of others.

The hole in the molar taught me mya lesson the hard way.

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satota

May 12, 2024

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Thank you!

My lesson taught by molar filling

On my way home, I dropped in at the local Japanese restaurant.

While having strawberry ice cream for dessert, I felt something hard in my mouth.

SeeThinking it was just a seed ofa strawberry seed, I swallowed it without much thought.

This change in the first part of your sentence will make it sound more natural and casual. Nothing wrong with the original necessarily, just sounds more native this way!

Getting home, however, I realized it had been athe filling of my molar.

sentence structure and article correction

The next morning, when I was preparing breakfast, I just got stuck, looking at the green pepper in sauteed vegetables.

I thought, "I can't bite this huge one without an unstuffed molar!"

"Without" would mean that there IS a filling in the molar. "with" would mean the filling is missing.

After I finished slicing them into smaller pieces, one of my friends came up to myto mind.

correction of phrase

She sometimes brings to us her homemade meals like simmered yellowtail with daikon (Japanese radish) or chilled Chinese noodles with various toppings.

no need for the word "to" before "us"

I remembered all the ingredients in them were cut small.

At first, I thought she was just a meticulous person, but later it turned out that she wore perfect dentures.

When I gave her a hard rice cracker, I was told that I needed more sensitivity.

On top of that, during a meal, she looks like she brooding about something and never stuffs her face with food.

the pronoun "she" is needed to signify who is brooding or thinking in the sentence

Finally, I felt like I got to the answer.

My own experience of losing a molar filling has allowed me to understand the pain of others.

The hole in the molar taught me my lesson the hard way.

Letting this be a moral, I might as well keep away from a dentist for the time being.

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Overall, really good writing! Just some minor grammar fixes to make the story flow more naturally and sound more like a native English speaker. This is my first time making corrections, so I hope it's alright!

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satota

May 12, 2024

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Thank you!

On my way home, I dropped in at the local Japanese restaurant.

While having strawberry ice cream for dessert, I felt something hard in my mouth.

SeeAssuming it was just a seed of strawberry seed, I swallowed it without much thought.

GUpon getting home, however, I realized it had been a filling of a molar.

The next morning, when I was preparing breakfast, I just got stuck,was stumped looking at the green pepper in the sauteed vegetables.

I thought, "I can't bite this huge one without an unstuffed molar!"

After I finished slicing them into smaller pieces, one of my friends came up to myto mind.

She sometimes brings to us herus homemade meals like simmered yellowtail with daikon (Japanese radish) or chilled Chinese noodles with various toppings.

I remembered that all the ingredients in them were cut small.

When I gave her a hard rice cracker, I was told that I needed to be more sensitivitye.

On top of that, during a meal, she always looks like she's brooding about something and never stuffs her face with food.

Finally, I felt like I got to the answercould relate.

My own experience of losing a molar filling has allowed me to understand the pain of others.

The hole in themy molar taught me mythis lesson the hard way.

Letting this be a moral, I might as well keep away from athe dentist for the time being.

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satota

May 12, 2024

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Thank you!

Letting this be a moral, I might as well keep away from a dentist for the time being.


Letting this be a moral, I might as well keep away from athe dentist for the time being.

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My own experience of losing a molar filling has allowed me to understand the pain of others.


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My own experience of losing a molar filling has allowhelped me to understand the pain of others.

The hole in the molar taught me my lesson the hard way.


The hole in themy molar taught me mythis lesson the hard way.

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The hole in the molar taught me mya lesson the hard way.

My lesson taught by molar filling


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My lLessons taught by a molar filling

I think this title sounds hilarious

On my way home, I dropped in at the local Japanese restaurant.


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

On my way home, I dropped in atby the local Japanese restaurant.

While having strawberry ice cream for dessert, I felt something hard in my mouth.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Seeing it as just a seed of strawberry, I swallowed it without much thought.


SeeAssuming it was just a seed of strawberry seed, I swallowed it without much thought.

SeeThinking it was just a seed ofa strawberry seed, I swallowed it without much thought.

This change in the first part of your sentence will make it sound more natural and casual. Nothing wrong with the original necessarily, just sounds more native this way!

SeeAssuming it was just a seed of strawberry seed, I swallowed it without much thought.

Getting home, however, I realized it had been a filling of molar.


GUpon getting home, however, I realized it had been a filling of a molar.

Getting home, however, I realized it had been athe filling of my molar.

sentence structure and article correction

GettingWhen I got home, however, I realized it had been a fillingone of my molar fillings.

The next morning, when I was preparing breakfast, I just got stuck, looking at the green pepper in sauteed vegetables.


The next morning, when I was preparing breakfast, I just got stuck,was stumped looking at the green pepper in the sauteed vegetables.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The next morning, whenas I was preparing breakfast and sauteing vegetables, I just got stuck, looking at the green pepper in sauteed vegetablesamong them.

I thought, "I can't bite this huge one without an unstuffed molar!"


I thought, "I can't bite this huge one without an unstuffed molar!"

I thought, "I can't bite this huge one without an unstuffed molar!"

"Without" would mean that there IS a filling in the molar. "with" would mean the filling is missing.

I thought, "I can't bite this huge onepepper without an unstuffed molarmy molar filling!"

After I finished slicing them into smaller pieces, one of my friends came up to my mind.


After I finished slicing them into smaller pieces, one of my friends came up to myto mind.

After I finished slicing them into smaller pieces, one of my friends came up to myto mind.

correction of phrase

After I finished slicing them vegetables into smaller pieces, one of my friends came up to myto mind.

She sometimes brings to us her homemade meals like simmered yellowtail with daikon (Japanese radish) or chilled Chinese noodles with various toppings.


She sometimes brings to us herus homemade meals like simmered yellowtail with daikon (Japanese radish) or chilled Chinese noodles with various toppings.

She sometimes brings to us her homemade meals like simmered yellowtail with daikon (Japanese radish) or chilled Chinese noodles with various toppings.

no need for the word "to" before "us"

She sometimes brings to us herus homemade meals, like simmered yellowtail with daikon (Japanese radish) or chilled Chinese noodles with various toppings.

I remembered all the ingredients in them were cut small.


I remembered that all the ingredients in them were cut small.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I remembered all the ingredients in them were cut smallfinely.

Finally, I felt like I got to the answer.


Finally, I felt like I got to the answercould relate.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Finally, I felt like I got to the answsolved a mystery.

At first, I thought she was just a meticulous person, but later it turned out that she wore perfect dentures.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

At first, I thought she was just a meticulous person, but later it turned out that she wore perfect dentures.

When I gave her a hard rice cracker, I was told that I needed more sensitivity.


When I gave her a hard rice cracker, I was told that I needed to be more sensitivitye.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

On top of that, during a meal, she looks like brooding about something and never stuffs her face with food.


On top of that, during a meal, she always looks like she's brooding about something and never stuffs her face with food.

On top of that, during a meal, she looks like she brooding about something and never stuffs her face with food.

the pronoun "she" is needed to signify who is brooding or thinking in the sentence

On top of that, during a meal, she always looksed like brooding aboutover something and never stuffsed her face with food.

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