Sept. 2, 2020
My left ear
I have difficulty hearing in my left ear. In particular, I won't notice if a man with low tone calls out to me from my left side. In addition to my difficulty hearing, it's too hard to hear lately because wearing mask make sounds muffled.
わたしは左耳が聞こえづらい。特に声の低い男性に、左側から呼びかけられても反応できない。ただでさえ聞こえないのに、マスクのせいで声が篭って最近は全然聞こえないんだ。
My left ear
In particular, I won't notice if a man with a low tonvoice calls out to me from my left side.
or, more likely, 'a man with a low voice TALKS to me on my left side'. That is, 'calling' is by definition louder than talking so you might hear him even if he is on your left side.
In addition to my difficultybeing hard of hearing, it's tooeven harder to hear latelythese days, because wearing a mask makes sounds muffled.
You could better distinguish between the ongoing condition of being hard of hearing and the current hearing problem due to wearing a mask. It's difficult because 'hearing' is the main word in both cases.
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awesome writing for a beginner.
My left ear
I have difficulty hearing in my left ear.
This sentence is good. Another common way to say this in English is: "I am hard of hearing in my left ear."
In particular, I won't notice if a man with a low tonvoice calls out to me from my left side.
In addition to mySince I already have difficulty hearing, it's too hard to hear lately because wearing masks makes sounds so muffled I can barely hear at all.
My correction makes the sentence more streamlined and (I think) match closer to the tone/meaning of the Japanese version.
Only correcting the grammar would be: "In addition to my difficulty hearing, it's too hard to hear lately because wearing masks makes sounds muffled."
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Good job! Let me know if you have any questions.
Sept. 2, 2020
Thank you so much!
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My left ear This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I have difficulty hearing in my left ear. I have difficulty hearing in my left ear. This sentence is good. Another common way to say this in English is: "I am hard of hearing in my left ear." |
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In particular, I won't notice if a man with low tone calls out to me from my left side. In particular, I In particular, I won't notice if a man with a low or, more likely, 'a man with a low voice TALKS to me on my left side'. That is, 'calling' is by definition louder than talking so you might hear him even if he is on your left side. |
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In addition to my difficulty hearing, it's too hard to hear lately because wearing mask make sounds muffled.
My correction makes the sentence more streamlined and (I think) match closer to the tone/meaning of the Japanese version. Only correcting the grammar would be: "In addition to my difficulty hearing, it's too hard to hear lately because wearing masks makes sounds muffled." In addition to my You could better distinguish between the ongoing condition of being hard of hearing and the current hearing problem due to wearing a mask. It's difficult because 'hearing' is the main word in both cases. |
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