Oct. 4, 2022
My learning experience
I learned English as second language, when I was 11 years. I imagined that I come Mirror of the Sky Bolivia. In my dream, I admire pure sky and cloud like milk, and forget myself in heaven. Western view style is different with eastern one. Different scenery have different wonderful. Because of view, I was interested in foreign culture. Language is culture door. So I had to learn English. After 8 years, my ability doesn't excellence. I learn English to sweat blood, so I'm confused. What can I doing?
My learning experience
I learned English as second language, when I was 11 years old.
I imagined that I comame to(?) the Mirror of the Sky Bolivia.
I'm not sure what you're trying to say
past tense
In my dream, I admired the pure sky and cloud -like milk, and forgeot myself in heaven.
past tense if you're talking about the same thing in the last sentence
The Western view style is different with eto the Eastern one.
I'm not sure what "style" you're talking about. Art style? Aesthetics? I would specify which style so the reader can understand better.
Different scenery havecan be wonderful in different wonderfulays.
Because of this view, I was interested in foreign culture.
Language is a door to different culture doors.
So I had to learn English.
After 8 years, my ability doeisn't excellencet.
I learn English to sweat blood, so I'm confused.
I don't understand "sweat blood"
What can I doing?
Oct. 4, 2022
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My learning experience This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I learned English as second language, when I was 11 years. I learned English as second language, when I was 11 years old. |
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I imagined that I come Mirror of the Sky Bolivia. I imagined that I c I'm not sure what you're trying to say past tense |
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In my dream, I admire pure sky and cloud like milk, and forget myself in heaven. In my dream, I admired the pure sky and cloud past tense if you're talking about the same thing in the last sentence |
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Western view style is different with eastern one. The Western I'm not sure what "style" you're talking about. Art style? Aesthetics? I would specify which style so the reader can understand better. |
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Different scenery have different wonderful. Different scenery |
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Because of view, I was interested in foreign culture. Because of this view, I was interested in foreign culture. |
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Language is culture door. Language is a door to different culture |
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So I had to learn English. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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After 8 years, my ability doesn't excellence. After 8 years, my ability |
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I learn English to sweat blood, so I'm confused. I learn English to sweat blood, so I'm confused. I don't understand "sweat blood" |
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What can I doing? What can I do |
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