June 26, 2025
My latest Reading in English
Hello everybody,
Today i talk you about m'y latest reading.
First, i read a news about an USA' s attack on Iran. Fortunately, i saw that our Macron président does not join USA in their fighting.
I write that because i saw on Tiktok the opposite reaction. I was afraid because of spoke an attack on France too.
However, many leaders want peace talks to stop fighting. They does want take sides for them.
Secondly, i read a news about a chimp escapes from a zoo.
Around a north of Japan, a chimp escapes from a zoo. He use power lines to move. People want to catch him but it is difficult. People use a tranquilizer on him, the chimp fell down.
However, the chimp is fine, and he ran away again.
Thirdly, i read a news about a hemophilia.
In 1970, 3000 people die cause of USA. Several patients affected hemophilia, got a blood from USA. However, the blood was contaminated. It was a prisoners or drug person gave their blood.
The families ask that the governement take their responsabilities.
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In English, there are many difference punctuation styles. The MLA and APA styles are two of the more common styles. Many others also exist.
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Today i talk youI would like to write about m'y latest readings.
First, iI read a news article about anthe USA' s attack on Iran's nuclear facilities.
Fortunately, iI saw that our Macron président doesPresident Macron did not join the USA in their fightingis act of aggression.
I write that because i sawMON COUP DE POUCE: However, on TiktTok theI noticed an opposite reaction.
MON COUP DE POUCE: I was afraid because of spoke an attack on France tooif France got involved in that violence, an retaliatory attack would ensue.
an retaliatory attack --> une attaque de représailles (?)
However, manyit seems that many world leaders want peace talks to stop this fighting.
They does wantMost of them are reluctant to take sides for them.
Most of them are reluctant to take sides. --> La plupart d'entre eux sont réticents à prendre parti.
Secondly, i read a news about a chimp that escapesd from a zoo.
Around a En anglais américain : Somewhere in northern Japan, a chimp escaped from a zoo.¶
En anglais britannique : : Somewhere in the north of Japan, a chimp escapesd from a zoo.
He use power lines to move.[MEANING UNKNOWN / SIGNIFICATION INCONNUE]
I could not understand this sentence.
People wantattempted to catch him, but it iwas difficult.
People useThe police shot him with a tranquilizer on him,, and then chimp fell down from his perch.
HoweverAt any rate, the chimp is fine, and now. However, he ran away once again.
ThirdFinally, i read a news article about a hemophilia.
In 1970, 3000 people die cause ofd of this disease in the USA.
Severalome of patients affectedwith hemophilia, got atainted blood from the USA.
However, the blood was contaminMY GUESS: Fortunately, the contaminated blood was later isolated.
It was a prisoners or drug person gave their blood.
TSeveral of the families ask thathave asked the governement to take their responsaibilitiey for this mess.
Plusieurs des familles ont demandé au gouvernement de prendre la responsabilité de ce désordre.
MyThe latest thing I read in English / The Latest Thing I Reading in English
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"Reading" with a capital R is a town in England.
If it's meant to be title case, you would have needed to capitalise "latest"
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A "reading" has a strong sense of being either eading something publicly out load (especially in the context of religious ceremonies) or an assignment. We normally wouldn't use "a reading" to describe something you chose to read, which is why I rephrased the title.
Hello everybody,
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Today iI will talk to you about m'y latest reading.
First, iI read a news about anthe USA' s attack on Iran.
There's only one "USA" so it's "the USA" instead of "an USA".
Fortunately, i saw that our Macron préesident does no, Macron didn't join the USA in their fighting.
Not sure if the aim was to just describe that he is the president (which is the correction I gave here), our to use President as a title (in which case it would be President Macron").
I wriote that because iI saw on Tiktok the opposite reaction on Tiktok .
The word "I" should always be a capital letter.
I was afraid because ofhe spoke of an attack on France too.
However, many leaders want peace talks to stop the fighting.
They (does / don't) want to take sides for them.
Not sure which you wanted here, but "does" is about habitual actions.
Secondly, iI read asome news about a chimp's escapes from a zoo.
"a news article" or "some news". News itself isn't countable but articles are.
Around athe north of Japan, a chimp escapesd from a zoo.
Watch you tenses! You're talking about something that already happened, so should be past tense.
There's only one "north of Japan" so it should be "the north of Japan" not "a north of Japan"
He used power lines to move.
People wanted to catch him but it iwas difficult.
People used a tranquilizer on him, and the chimp fell down.
Thirdly, iI read a news about a hemophilia.
In 1970, 3000 people die d because of it in the USA.
Several patients affected by hemophilia, got a blood fromtransfusion from the USA.
It was aeither prisoners or drug person who had taken drugs that gave their blood.
The families asked that the governement take their responsaibilitiesy.
My lLatest Reading in English
Hello everybody,
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Today i talkI'll tell you about m'y latest reading.
Alternative: Today I'll talk to you about...
"Tell you" is more appropriate because "talk" is more suggestive of a discussion. When you tell someone something, it means you are going to speak, without necessarily someone else speaking back to you.
First, iI read asome news about an USA' sAmerican attack on Iran.
"I" is always capitalized.
You can either say "an American attack," or "an attack by the USA"
Fortunately, iI saw that our Macron préesident does, Macron, will not join the USA in their fighting/attacks.
I write thatis because iI saw on Tiktok the opposite reaction on TikTok.
This sentence sounds more natural when arranged this way
I was afraid because ofthey spoke about an attack on France too.
However, many leaders want peace talks - to stop fightingattacks.
The word "fight" is not typically appropriate in the context of wars
They does want to take sides for them.
Secondly, iI read a news about a chimp who escapesd from a zoo.
Around a north ofern Japan, a chimp escapesd from a zoo.
He used power lines to move.
An alternative suggestion: He got away by swinging on power lines.
People wanted to catch him, but it iwas difficult.
PeopleThey used a tranquilizer on him, the chimp and he fell down.
Using "they" and "he" to avoid repetition since the reader knows who these are describing
However, the chimp is finewas not subdued, and he ran away again.
More specific
Thirdly, iI read a news about a hemophilia.
In 1970, 3000 people die d because of the USA.
Several patients affectedwith hemophilia, got a blood from USA received blood transfusions from American sources.
However, the blood was contaminated.
It was a prisoners or drug personpeople on drugs who gave their blood.
The families asked that the governement take their responsaibilitiesy.
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In 1970, 3000 people die cause of USA. In 1970, 3000 people die In 1970, 3000 people die In 1970, 3000 people die |
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Several patients affected hemophilia, got a blood from USA. Several patients Several patients affected by hemophilia, got a blood S |
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However, the blood was contaminated. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
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It was a prisoners or drug person gave their blood. It was It was This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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My latest Reading in English My
If this was meant to be sentence case: "Reading" with a capital R is a town in England. If it's meant to be title case, you would have needed to capitalise "latest" --- A "reading" has a strong sense of being either eading something publicly out load (especially in the context of religious ceremonies) or an assignment. We normally wouldn't use "a reading" to describe something you chose to read, which is why I rephrased the title. IN MLA STYLE: Reactions to My In English, there are many difference punctuation styles. The MLA and APA styles are two of the more common styles. Many others also exist. |
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Hello everybody, Today i talk you about m'y latest reading. Hello everybody, Alternative: Today I'll talk to you about... "Tell you" is more appropriate because "talk" is more suggestive of a discussion. When you tell someone something, it means you are going to speak, without necessarily someone else speaking back to you. Hello everybody, Hello everybody, |
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First, i read a news about an USA' s attack on Iran. First, "I" is always capitalized. You can either say "an American attack," or "an attack by the USA" First, There's only one "USA" so it's "the USA" instead of "an USA". First, |
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Fortunately, i saw that our Macron président does not join USA in their fighting. Fortunately, Fortunately, i saw that our Not sure if the aim was to just describe that he is the president (which is the correction I gave here), our to use President as a title (in which case it would be President Macron"). Fortunately, |
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I write that because i saw on Tiktok the opposite reaction. I write th This sentence sounds more natural when arranged this way I wr The word "I" should always be a capital letter.
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I was afraid because of spoke an attack on France too. I was afraid because I was afraid because MON COUP DE POUCE: I was afraid because an retaliatory attack --> une attaque de représailles (?) |
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However, many leaders want peace talks to stop fighting. However, many leaders want peace talks - to stop The word "fight" is not typically appropriate in the context of wars However, many leaders want peace talks to stop the fighting. However, |
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They does want take sides for them. They do They (do Not sure which you wanted here, but "does" is about habitual actions.
Most of them are reluctant to take sides. --> La plupart d'entre eux sont réticents à prendre parti. |
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Secondly, i read a news about a chimp escapes from a zoo. Secondly, Secondly, "a news article" or "some news". News itself isn't countable but articles are. Secondly, i read a news about a chimp that escape |
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Around a north of Japan, a chimp escapes from a zoo. Around Around Watch you tenses! You're talking about something that already happened, so should be past tense. There's only one "north of Japan" so it should be "the north of Japan" not "a north of Japan"
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He use power lines to move. He used power lines to move. An alternative suggestion: He got away by swinging on power lines. He used power lines to move.
I could not understand this sentence. |
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People want to catch him but it is difficult. People wanted to catch him, but it People wanted to catch him but it People |
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People use a tranquilizer on him, the chimp fell down.
Using "they" and "he" to avoid repetition since the reader knows who these are describing People used a tranquilizer on him, and the chimp fell down.
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However, the chimp is fine, and he ran away again. However, the chimp More specific
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Thirdly, i read a news about a hemophilia. Thirdly, Thirdly,
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