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mayra17

July 29, 2025

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My last vacations

I awesomw day my family and I went to the beach; there we had been all the day lying on the sand enjoying the sun and the stunning sound of the waves. It was the best trip have I ever had, so I wanna repeat one more time and spend time swimming or eating seafood because I really love it.

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IOn one awesomwe day my family and I went to the beach; there we had bewe spent all the day lying on the sand enjoying the sun and the stunning sound of the waves.

It was the best trip have I ever had, so I wanna repeat it one more time and spend time swimming or eating seafood because I really love it.

I had an awesomwe day with my family and I went to the beach; there we had been all the day lying on the sand we were been lying on the sand all the day while enjoying the sun and the stunning sound of the waves.

It was the best trip have I ever had, so I wanna repeatdo it again one more time and spend time swimming or eating seafood because I really love it.

In this case, instead of 'repeat' it would be natural to say that you would "do" something again when referring to actions you want to repeat.

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Saachan01

July 29, 2025

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Minor mistake on my part, remove the "been" = "we were lying on the sand all the day"

It was an awesomwe day, my family and I went to the beach; t. There we had been all the day lyinglaid down on the sand all day, enjoying the sun, and the stunning sound of the waves.

It was the best trip I have I ever had, so I wannat to repeat it one more time and spend time swimming or eating seafood, because I really loved it.

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mayra17

July 29, 2025

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Thank you

My last vacations


I awesomw day my family and I went to the beach; there we had been all the day lying on the sand enjoying the sun and the stunning sound of the waves.


It was an awesomwe day, my family and I went to the beach; t. There we had been all the day lyinglaid down on the sand all day, enjoying the sun, and the stunning sound of the waves.

I had an awesomwe day with my family and I went to the beach; there we had been all the day lying on the sand we were been lying on the sand all the day while enjoying the sun and the stunning sound of the waves.

IOn one awesomwe day my family and I went to the beach; there we had bewe spent all the day lying on the sand enjoying the sun and the stunning sound of the waves.

It was the best trip have I ever had, so I wanna repeat one more time and spend time swimming or eating seafood because I really love it.


It was the best trip I have I ever had, so I wannat to repeat it one more time and spend time swimming or eating seafood, because I really loved it.

It was the best trip have I ever had, so I wanna repeatdo it again one more time and spend time swimming or eating seafood because I really love it.

In this case, instead of 'repeat' it would be natural to say that you would "do" something again when referring to actions you want to repeat.

It was the best trip have I ever had, so I wanna repeat it one more time and spend time swimming or eating seafood because I really love it.

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