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My last day in 2021

Hi guys, I just want to share my expectations for this day. Firstly I got to pick up my girlfriend at the train station. She is coming from a short trip in which she visited her sister in Berlin. While I am happy about her return, I also feel pretty stressed out. It´s almost lunchtime and I am already behind my schedule.
Most of the tasks I kept pushing through. Which was clearly a mistake. I got to do some dishes for the party tonight. Also, I do need to go shopping as well.
I can´t distribute the tasks on my list between me and my girlfriend, as she would be mad and react with incomprehension. I don't blame her for that.
But regarding my list of tasks, I have to confess to you guys, that with this letter I have one thing less to do. For this reason, I want to express my gratitude to whoever is correcting my kindergarten English style.

Have a good New years eve.

Yours
Richard

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Hi guys, I just want to share my expectations for this oday.

Firstly, I gothave to pick up my girlfriend at the train station.

While I am happy about her returnlooking forward to seeing her, I also feel pretty stressed out.

It´s almost lunchtime and I am already behind my schedule.

Most of the tasks I kept prushing through all of my tasks.

WThichs was clearly a mistake.

I would combine this with the previous sentence - I kept rushing through all of my tasks, which was a mistake.

I have got to do some dishes for the party tonight.

got to - means i 'have to' and 'was able to' when in the past tense. E.g I got to see her at the station today = I was able to see her at the station today. I have got to see her at the station today = I must see her at the station today.

I can´t distribute the tasks on my list between me and my girlfriend, as she would be mad and react with incomprehension.

This sentence is complicated to correct, i would say 'I can't ask/expect my girlfriend to do any of the tasks on my list, as she would either get mad or react negatively.

I docan't blame her for that.

But in regardings to my list of tasks, I have tomust confess to you guys, that with, that having written this letter I have one thing less to do.

For this reason, I want to express my gratitude to whoever is correcting my kindergarten English style.

You're welcome :) You would say 'basic English', but i wouldn't call it that. No need to underestimate your skills - I would be able to understand you fine and these corrections are mainly stylistic.

Have a good New years eve.

Happy Hogmanay!

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Well done :) Have a good new years eve!

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Hi peteyb, thank you very much for correcting!

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Thank you!

My last day in 2021


Hi guys, I just want to share my expectations for this day.


Hi guys, I just want to share my expectations for this oday.

Firstly I got to pick up my girlfriend at the train station.


Firstly, I gothave to pick up my girlfriend at the train station.

She is coming from a short trip in which she visited her sister in Berlin.


While I am happy about her return, I also feel pretty stressed out.


While I am happy about her returnlooking forward to seeing her, I also feel pretty stressed out.

It´s almost lunchtime and I am already behind my schedule.


It´s almost lunchtime and I am already behind my schedule.

Most of the tasks I kept pushing through.


Most of the tasks I kept prushing through all of my tasks.

Which was clearly a mistake.


WThichs was clearly a mistake.

I would combine this with the previous sentence - I kept rushing through all of my tasks, which was a mistake.

I got to do some dishes for the party tonight.


I have got to do some dishes for the party tonight.

got to - means i 'have to' and 'was able to' when in the past tense. E.g I got to see her at the station today = I was able to see her at the station today. I have got to see her at the station today = I must see her at the station today.

Also, I do need to go shopping as well.


I can´t distribute the tasks on my list between me and my girlfriend, as she would be mad and react with incomprehension.


I can´t distribute the tasks on my list between me and my girlfriend, as she would be mad and react with incomprehension.

This sentence is complicated to correct, i would say 'I can't ask/expect my girlfriend to do any of the tasks on my list, as she would either get mad or react negatively.

I don't blame her for that.


I docan't blame her for that.

But regarding my list of tasks, I have to confess to you guys, that with this letter I have one thing less to do.


But in regardings to my list of tasks, I have tomust confess to you guys, that with, that having written this letter I have one thing less to do.

For this reason, I want to express my gratitude to whoever is correcting my kindergarten English style.


For this reason, I want to express my gratitude to whoever is correcting my kindergarten English style.

You're welcome :) You would say 'basic English', but i wouldn't call it that. No need to underestimate your skills - I would be able to understand you fine and these corrections are mainly stylistic.

Have a good New years eve.


Have a good New years eve.

Happy Hogmanay!

Yours


Richard


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