Dec. 31, 2021
Hi guys, I just want to share my expectations for this day. Firstly I got to pick up my girlfriend at the train station. She is coming from a short trip in which she visited her sister in Berlin. While I am happy about her return, I also feel pretty stressed out. It´s almost lunchtime and I am already behind my schedule.
Most of the tasks I kept pushing through. Which was clearly a mistake. I got to do some dishes for the party tonight. Also, I do need to go shopping as well.
I can´t distribute the tasks on my list between me and my girlfriend, as she would be mad and react with incomprehension. I don't blame her for that.
But regarding my list of tasks, I have to confess to you guys, that with this letter I have one thing less to do. For this reason, I want to express my gratitude to whoever is correcting my kindergarten English style.
Have a good New years eve.
Yours
Richard
Hi guys, I just want to share my expectations for this oday.
Firstly, I gothave to pick up my girlfriend at the train station.
While I am happy about her returnlooking forward to seeing her, I also feel pretty stressed out.
It´s almost lunchtime and I am already behind my schedule.
Most of the tasks I kept prushing through all of my tasks.
WThichs was clearly a mistake.
I would combine this with the previous sentence - I kept rushing through all of my tasks, which was a mistake.
I have got to do some dishes for the party tonight.
got to - means i 'have to' and 'was able to' when in the past tense. E.g I got to see her at the station today = I was able to see her at the station today. I have got to see her at the station today = I must see her at the station today.
I can´t distribute the tasks on my list between me and my girlfriend, as she would be mad and react with incomprehension.
This sentence is complicated to correct, i would say 'I can't ask/expect my girlfriend to do any of the tasks on my list, as she would either get mad or react negatively.
I docan't blame her for that.
But in regardings to my list of tasks, I have tomust confess to you guys, that with, that having written this letter I have one thing less to do.
For this reason, I want to express my gratitude to whoever is correcting my kindergarten English style.
You're welcome :) You would say 'basic English', but i wouldn't call it that. No need to underestimate your skills - I would be able to understand you fine and these corrections are mainly stylistic.
Have a good New years eve.
Happy Hogmanay!
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Well done :) Have a good new years eve!
My last day in 2021 |
Hi guys, I just want to share my expectations for this day. Hi guys, I just want to share my expectations for t |
Firstly I got to pick up my girlfriend at the train station. Firstly, I |
She is coming from a short trip in which she visited her sister in Berlin. |
While I am happy about her return, I also feel pretty stressed out. While I am |
It´s almost lunchtime and I am already behind my schedule. It´s almost lunchtime and I am already behind |
Most of the tasks I kept pushing through.
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Which was clearly a mistake.
I would combine this with the previous sentence - I kept rushing through all of my tasks, which was a mistake. |
I got to do some dishes for the party tonight. I have got to do some dishes for the party tonight. got to - means i 'have to' and 'was able to' when in the past tense. E.g I got to see her at the station today = I was able to see her at the station today. I have got to see her at the station today = I must see her at the station today. |
Also, I do need to go shopping as well. |
I can´t distribute the tasks on my list between me and my girlfriend, as she would be mad and react with incomprehension. I can´t distribute the tasks on my list between me and my girlfriend, as she would be mad and react with incomprehension. This sentence is complicated to correct, i would say 'I can't ask/expect my girlfriend to do any of the tasks on my list, as she would either get mad or react negatively. |
I don't blame her for that. I |
But regarding my list of tasks, I have to confess to you guys, that with this letter I have one thing less to do. But in regard |
For this reason, I want to express my gratitude to whoever is correcting my kindergarten English style. For this reason, I want to express my gratitude to whoever is correcting my kindergarten English style. You're welcome :) You would say 'basic English', but i wouldn't call it that. No need to underestimate your skills - I would be able to understand you fine and these corrections are mainly stylistic. |
Have a good New years eve. Have a good New years eve. Happy Hogmanay! |
Yours |
Richard |
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