May 10, 2020
I bought my laptop in January. It cost me nearly 600 bucks. Now it is even more expensive as the our economy has fallen down. I'm pleased with its keyboard, screen and configuration. Keyboard is good and comfortable for typing. But, as it is 15.6 inches and has a numpad section, I found out that it needs to be shifted a little bit right, so that the main keyboard is in the centre for a balanced position of hands. I think next time I'll buy a 14 inch or less because they don't have a numpad section.
is it right to say 'notebook' instead of 'laptop'?
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I bought mya laptop in January.
Now it is even more expensive asbecause/since the our economy has fallen downcollapsed.
I'm pleased with itsthe keyboard, screen and configuration.
But, as it is 15.6 inches and has a numpad section, I found outrealized that it needs to be shifted a little bit to the right, so that the main keyboard is in the centre for a balanced position of hands.
"Centre" is British English and "center" is American English. "Found out" is ok too, but I'd say "realized."
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Nice job. I just made a few suggestions.
It cost me nearly 600 bucks.
Now it is even more expensive as the our economy has fallen downdeteriorated/crashed.
Using "fallen down" sounds a bit strange because people tend to say "fallen down" in a more literal manner. (Example: The tower has fallen down.)
KThe keyboard is good and comfortable for typing.
But, as because it is 15.6 inches and has a numpad section, I found out that it needs toshould be shifted a lbittle bit to the right, so that the main keyboard is in the centrer for a balanced hand position of hands.
"Needs to be" is again grammatically correct, but it conveys more urgency. It's like saying something needs to be done immediately. In this case, I would use "should be" because it sounds more like a suggestion.
I think next time I'll buy a 14 inch or lesslaptop that is 14 inches wide or smaller because they don't have a numpad section.
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The words "notebook" and "laptop" are interchangeable, but (at least in the United States) people tend to say "laptop" more.
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Now it is even more expensive as the our economy has fallen down. Now it is even more expensive as the our economy has Using "fallen down" sounds a bit strange because people tend to say "fallen down" in a more literal manner. (Example: The tower has fallen down.) Now it is even more expensive |
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Keyboard is good and comfortable for typing.
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But, as it is 15.6 inches and has a numpad section, I found out that it needs to be shifted a little bit right, so that the main keyboard is in the centre for a balanced position of hands. But "Needs to be" is again grammatically correct, but it conveys more urgency. It's like saying something needs to be done immediately. In this case, I would use "should be" because it sounds more like a suggestion. But, as it is 15.6 inches and has a numpad section, I "Centre" is British English and "center" is American English. "Found out" is ok too, but I'd say "realized." |
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