Jan. 8, 2026
My kitty
My cat’s name is Dal. The meaning is ‘moon’ in Korean. She has yellow-ish gray fur coat and green eyes. She came here to oversea with us eight years ago and she turned to 16 years old this year. We had one more cat when we settled in this country, but she passed away last year by cancer. So, Dal is my only cat now.
Today was Dal’s regular check up day. We have her the check up every six months due to her age. Her health is not bad for her age. She eats well and play well, but bowl movements are problem. Diarrhea is chronicle problem for her and it getting worse these days. She sometimes made poop puddle on carpet floor.
The clinic we went to is a very friendly place. We have visited here since we moved in this area. A vet checked Dal and complimented she has a good behavior. After that, she took some blood samples, squeezed Dal’s anal sac (we heard Dal’s scream meowing!) and let her go to us. We got a medication for better bowl movement. I hope it will work!
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My cat’s name is Dal, which means 'moon' in Korean.
The meaning is ‘moon’ in Korean.
She has yellow-ish gray fur coat and green eyes.
If you delete "coat" the sentence is perfect.
She came here to overseas with us eight years ago, and she turned to 16 years old16 this year.
"Turned 16" is enough. The phrase is widely used for age.
It is a little redundant to include "here" and "overseas."
You could name locations to clarify. For example, "she came overseas to Cornwall with us...etc." or "She came here with us when we left Korea."
We had one more cat when we settled in this country, but she passed away last year byfrom cancer.
"from" or "of" cancer are the prepositions that work.
Today was Dal’sDal had her regular check up day.
We have her theShe has a check up every six months due to her age.
She eats well and plays well, but bowel movements are problem.
Diarrhea is chronicle problem for her and itShe has chronic diarrhea, and it is / has been getting worse these days.
She sometimes madekes poop puddles on the carpet floor.
The clinic we wentgo to is a very friendly place.
customary action in the present tense
We have visited gone there since we moved into this area.
"visit" and "visiting" the vet are fine, but a more technical description would be to go to the vet for an appointment.
A vet checked Dal and complimented she has ar on her good behavior.
to avoid the awkward repetition of "her on her" you could say "praised her good behavior"--although it's not quite the same!
After that, she took some blood samples, squeezed Dal’s anal sac (we heard Dal’s scream meowing!), and lreturned her go to us.
We got a medication for better bowel movement.
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Good job!
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Thank you so much!!
My kitty
My cat’s name is Dal.
The meaning i'Dal' means ‘moon’ in Korean.
The original sentence here isn't really wrong, but this is a slightly more natural way to phrase it in my opinion.
She has a yellow-ish gray fur coat and green eyes.
She came here to overseas with us eight years ago and she turned to 16 years old this year.
We had one more cat when we settled in this country, but she passed away last year bydue to cancer.
Firstly, I'm very sorry for you loss.
Secondly, here "due to" feels the most appropriate.
So, Dal is my only cat now.
Today was Dal’s regular check up day.
"checkup" can be used as a single word
We have her theake a check up every six months due to her age.
I'm not exactly clear on what you wanted to say here.
If the vet asks that she has the checkup this often it would be better to say "She has to have a checkup every six months due to her age."
Her health is non't bad for her age.
Using a contraction feels more natural.
She eats well and plays well, but bowel movements are problem.
"bowl" = something you eat from
"bowel" = internal organ
Diarrhea is chronicle problem for her and it getting worse these days.
"chronic" = recurring/persistent
"chronicle" = a record of some events
She sometimes madekes poop puddles on the carpet floor.
The clinic we went to is a very friendly place.
We have been visiteding here since we moved into this area.
Since you are continuously visiting it would be appropriate to use the present perfect tense here. This indicates that the action started in the past and continues into the present (and likely will continue into the future).
"moved" usually takes "to"
A vet checked Dal and complimented she has ar on her good behavior.
Alternatively "said she is well-behaved"
After that, she took some blood samples, squeezed Dal’s anal sac (we heard Dal’s scream meyowling!) and let her go to us.
"yowling" is a loud noise that cats make when stressed, in-pain, etc.
We got a medication for better bowel movements.
I hope it will work!
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Hopefully the medicine works!
Good job with the writing, keep it up!
yesterday
Thank you so much! I can't believe I made so many simple mistakes. Now she’s constipated!! The medication was a bit too strong, I guess. LOL
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We have visited here since we moved in this area. We have been visit Since you are continuously visiting it would be appropriate to use the present perfect tense here. This indicates that the action started in the past and continues into the present (and likely will continue into the future). "moved" usually takes "to" We have "visit" and "visiting" the vet are fine, but a more technical description would be to go to the vet for an appointment. |
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A vet checked Dal and complimented she has a good behavior. A vet checked Dal and complimented Alternatively "said she is well-behaved" A vet checked Dal and complimented to avoid the awkward repetition of "her on her" you could say "praised her good behavior"--although it's not quite the same! |
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After that, she got some blood samples, squeezed Dal’s anal sac (we heard Dal’s scream meowing!) and let her go to us. |
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We got a medication for better bowl movement. We got a medication for better bowel movements. We got a medication for better bowel movement. |
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I hope it will work! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Vet checked Dal and complimented she has a good behavior. |
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After that, she got some blood samples and squeezed Dal’s anal sac (we heard Dal’s scream meowing!) and let her to us. |
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The clinic we went to is a very friendly place. This sentence has been marked as perfect! The clinic we customary action in the present tense |
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After that, she took some blood samples, squeezed Dal’s anal sac (we heard Dal’s scream meowing!) and let her go to us. After that, she took some blood samples, squeezed Dal’s anal sac (we heard Dal’s "yowling" is a loud noise that cats make when stressed, in-pain, etc. After that, she took some blood samples, squeezed Dal’s anal sac (we heard Dal’s scream |
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We had one more cat when we settled in this country, but she passed away last year by cancer. We had one more cat when we settled in this country, but she passed away last year Firstly, I'm very sorry for you loss. Secondly, here "due to" feels the most appropriate. We had one more cat when we settled in this country, but she passed away last year "from" or "of" cancer are the prepositions that work. |
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Today was Dal’s regular check up day. Today was Dal’s regular check "checkup" can be used as a single word Today |
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We have her the check up every six months due to her age. We have her t I'm not exactly clear on what you wanted to say here. If the vet asks that she has the checkup this often it would be better to say "She has to have a checkup every six months due to her age."
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Her health is not bad for her age. Her health is Using a contraction feels more natural. |
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She eats well and play well, but bowl movements are problem. She eats well and plays well, but bowel movements are problem. "bowl" = something you eat from "bowel" = internal organ She eats well and plays well, but bowel movements are problem. |
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Diarrhea is chronicle problem for her and it getting worse these days. Diarrhea is chronic "chronic" = recurring/persistent "chronicle" = a record of some events
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She sometimes made poop puddle on carpet floor. She sometimes ma She sometimes ma |
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My cat’s name is Dal. This sentence has been marked as perfect! My cat’s name is Dal, which means 'moon' in Korean. |
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The meaning is ‘moon’ in Korean.
The original sentence here isn't really wrong, but this is a slightly more natural way to phrase it in my opinion.
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She has yellow-ish gray fur coat and green eyes. She has a yellow-ish gray fur coat and green eyes. She has yellow-ish gray fur If you delete "coat" the sentence is perfect. |
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She came here to oversea with us eight years ago and she turned to 16 years old this year. She came She came "Turned 16" is enough. The phrase is widely used for age. It is a little redundant to include "here" and "overseas." You could name locations to clarify. For example, "she came overseas to Cornwall with us...etc." or "She came here with us when we left Korea." |
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So, Dal is my only cat now. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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