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March 4, 2025

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my job (corrigeme)

Today I want to talk about my job.I am a teacher and for my it was a hard process to love what I decided to studied. Everything started when i was finishing my highschool and I was in a mood were I didn´t want to do anything for my future o I had never think of what kind of job like me already so that was the begining . I have never been a good student , but my dad always told me that he wants that every kids he will have needed to finish the university. I was in a war with myself because I didn´t want to study but also I didn´t want to be a disappointment for my parents so I decided to enter to a teachers univeristy .Every year that I was there in was like a nightmare but something happended when I give my first classes I remember that I enjoy so much the feeling of be in front of the students and help each one.

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mMy jJob (corrigeme)

Today I want to talk about my job. I am a teacher and for mye it was a hard process to love what I decided to studied.y.

Everything started when iI was finishing my high school and I was in a mood were I didn´t want to do anything for my future o. I had never thinkought of what kind of job like me already so that was the begining .I would like.

I erased the last part. It was redundant since you already specified it was the beginning with “Everything started.”

I have never been a good student , but my dad always told me that he wants that every kids he will have needed to finish the university.

For a more natural sound you can say “my dad always told me that he wants all his kids to finish college.”

I was in at war with myself because I didn´t want to study but also I didn´t want to be a disappointment for my parents, so I decided to enter into a teachers univeristy .sity. Every year that I was there in was like a nightmare but something happended when I giave my first classes. I remember that I enjoy so much the feeling of being in front of the students and helping each one. so much.

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Good job! I am glad that you came to love your profession!

mMy jJob (corrigeme)

Today, I want to talk about my job. I am a teacher, and for mye, it was a harddifficult process to love what I decided to studiedo.

Everything started when iI was finishing my high school and I was in a mood were I didn´t. I didn't have anything I specifically wanted to do anything forin my future o, and I had never thinkought of what kind of job like me already so that was the begining I may have liked to do.

I havewas never been a good student , but my dad always told me that he wants that every kids he will have neededed all of his kids to finish the university.

I was in at war with myself because I didn´'t want to study, but I also I didn´'t want to be a disappointment forto my parents, so I decided to enter to a teachersa univerisity .for teachers. Every year that I was there in was like a nightmare, but something happended when I giave my first classes. I remember that I enjoy so muched the feeling of being in front of the students and helping each one.

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I'm glad you began to like teaching!

Everything started when i was finishing my highschool and I was in a mood were I didn´t want to do anything for my future o I had never think of what kind of job like me already so that was the begining .


Everything started when iI was finishing my high school and I was in a mood were I didn´t. I didn't have anything I specifically wanted to do anything forin my future o, and I had never thinkought of what kind of job like me already so that was the begining I may have liked to do.

Everything started when iI was finishing my high school and I was in a mood were I didn´t want to do anything for my future o. I had never thinkought of what kind of job like me already so that was the begining .I would like.

I erased the last part. It was redundant since you already specified it was the beginning with “Everything started.”

my job (corrigeme)


mMy jJob (corrigeme)

mMy jJob (corrigeme)

Today I want to talk about my job.I am a teacher and for my it was a hard process to love what I decided to studied.


Today, I want to talk about my job. I am a teacher, and for mye, it was a harddifficult process to love what I decided to studiedo.

Today I want to talk about my job. I am a teacher and for mye it was a hard process to love what I decided to studied.y.

I have never been a good student , but my dad always told me that he wants that every kids he will have needed to finish the university.


I havewas never been a good student , but my dad always told me that he wants that every kids he will have neededed all of his kids to finish the university.

I have never been a good student , but my dad always told me that he wants that every kids he will have needed to finish the university.

For a more natural sound you can say “my dad always told me that he wants all his kids to finish college.”

I was in a war with myself because I didn´t want to study but also I didn´t want to be a disappointment for my parents so I decided to enter to a teachers univeristy .Every year that I was there in was like a nightmare but something happended when I give my first classes I remember that I enjoy so much the feeling of be in front of the students and help each one.


I was in at war with myself because I didn´'t want to study, but I also I didn´'t want to be a disappointment forto my parents, so I decided to enter to a teachersa univerisity .for teachers. Every year that I was there in was like a nightmare, but something happended when I giave my first classes. I remember that I enjoy so muched the feeling of being in front of the students and helping each one.

I was in at war with myself because I didn´t want to study but also I didn´t want to be a disappointment for my parents, so I decided to enter into a teachers univeristy .sity. Every year that I was there in was like a nightmare but something happended when I giave my first classes. I remember that I enjoy so much the feeling of being in front of the students and helping each one. so much.

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