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apro27

Feb. 4, 2025

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My job

Everyone wants to earn as more as he can in this crazy world. Working hard is one of the vehicles you need in order to optain what you really desire.
As for me, I am rather more romantic than realistic. Thus, I prefer to have a job which really helps people than an occupy that just helps me to earn a lot of money.
I work as a journalist on a site of a newspaper. My duty is to write the truth and only the truth. So I inform the users of the site about big issues, which other media try to ignore or they choose to provide fake news about these matters.
As you can imagine, my work is not so easy but it is very creative and sometimes funny. Most of all it gives me the feeling that I make something great, that I help people feel free by providing them the knowledge they need in order to take serious decisions about their lives.
As for the money unfortunately is not quite enough because I have choose to be in the media that criticizes the government and every authority. But, and this is rather strange, I am quite okay with it.

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My jJob.

Important words in title have capital letters.

Everyone wants to earn as moreuch as they can in this crazy world.

"they" can be used when you don't know if you are talking about a man or a woman.

Working hard is one of the vehicles you need in order to opbtain what you really desire.

As for me, I am rather more romantic than realistic.

Thus, I prefer to have a job which really helps people than an occupyation that just helps me to earn a lot of money.

I work as a journalist on a site of a newspaper site.

"newspaper site" not "site of a newspaper". "site of a newspaper" means where the newspaper physically is.

My duty is to write the truth and only the truth.

So I inform the users of the site about big issues, which other media try to ignore, or they choose to provide fake news about these matters.

Don't think you need the comma between issues and which. You are joining two sentences with or so put a comma before the "or"

As you can imagine, my work is not so easy but it is very creative and sometimes funny.

You do not need the "so" though you could probably leave it in.

Most of all, it gives me the feeling that I make something great,; that I help people feel free by providing them with the knowledge they need in order to take serious decisions about their lives.

"most of all" is a weak interruption so separated from rest of sentence with a comma. There are two related sentences so I have used a semi-colon to join them. "providing WITH the knowledge"

As for the money, unfortunately, it is not quite enough because I have choosen to be in the media that criticizes the government and everythe authorityies.

Unfortunately is a weak interruption so is separated from the rest of the sentence with commas. You are using the perfect tense of choose here to that is "have chosen". You can say "the authorities" to describe "every authority". That is how it would be phrased in English.

But, and this is rather strange, I am quite okay with it.

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Good work.

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apro27

Feb. 4, 2025

2

Thank you very much, especially for your comments.

My job

Everyone wants to earn as moreuch as they can in this crazy world.

Working hard is one of the vehicles you need in order to opbtain what you really desire.

As for me, I am rather more romantic than realistic.

Thus, I prefer to have a job which really helps people, rather than an occupyation that just helps me to earn a lot of money.

I work as a journalist on a site of a newspaper website.

My dutyjob is to write the truth and only the truth.

So I inform the users of the site about big issues, which other media try to ignore or they choose to provide fake news about these matters.

As you can imagine, my work is not so easy but it is very creative and sometimes funny.

Most of all, it gives me the feeling that I makeam doing something great, that I help people feel free by providing them with the knowledge they need in order to take serious decisions about their lives.

As for the money, unfortunately is not quite enough because I have choosen to be in thework in media that criticizes the government and every authority.

But, and this is rather strange, I am quite okay with it.

Feedback

Overall well written. There were just a few grammatical errors, but mostly details.

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apro27

Feb. 4, 2025

2

Thanks a lot, I will try to be better next time

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My jJob.

Important words in title have capital letters.

Everyone wants to earn as more as he can in this crazy world.


Everyone wants to earn as moreuch as they can in this crazy world.

Everyone wants to earn as moreuch as they can in this crazy world.

"they" can be used when you don't know if you are talking about a man or a woman.

Working hard is one of the vehicles you need in order to optain what you really desire.


Working hard is one of the vehicles you need in order to opbtain what you really desire.

Working hard is one of the vehicles you need in order to opbtain what you really desire.

As for me, I am rather more romantic than realistic.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I work as a journalist on a site of a newspaper.


I work as a journalist on a site of a newspaper website.

I work as a journalist on a site of a newspaper site.

"newspaper site" not "site of a newspaper". "site of a newspaper" means where the newspaper physically is.

My duty is to write the truth and only the truth.


My dutyjob is to write the truth and only the truth.

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So I inform the users of the site about big issues, which other media try to ignore or they choose to provide fake news about these matters.


So I inform the users of the site about big issues, which other media try to ignore or they choose to provide fake news about these matters.

So I inform the users of the site about big issues, which other media try to ignore, or they choose to provide fake news about these matters.

Don't think you need the comma between issues and which. You are joining two sentences with or so put a comma before the "or"

As for the money unfortunately is not quite enough because I have choose to be in the media that criticizes the government and every authority.


As for the money, unfortunately is not quite enough because I have choosen to be in thework in media that criticizes the government and every authority.

As for the money, unfortunately, it is not quite enough because I have choosen to be in the media that criticizes the government and everythe authorityies.

Unfortunately is a weak interruption so is separated from the rest of the sentence with commas. You are using the perfect tense of choose here to that is "have chosen". You can say "the authorities" to describe "every authority". That is how it would be phrased in English.

But, and this is rather strange, I am quite okay with it.


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Thus, I prefer to have a job which really helps people than an occupy that just helps me to earn a lot of money.


Thus, I prefer to have a job which really helps people, rather than an occupyation that just helps me to earn a lot of money.

Thus, I prefer to have a job which really helps people than an occupyation that just helps me to earn a lot of money.

As you can imagine, my work is not so easy but it is very creative and sometimes funny.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

As you can imagine, my work is not so easy but it is very creative and sometimes funny.

You do not need the "so" though you could probably leave it in.

Most of all it gives you the feeling that you make something great, that you help people feel free by providing them the knowledge they need in order to take serious decisions about their lives.


Thus, I prefer to have a job which really helps people than an occupy that just help me to earn a lot of money.


Most of all it gives me the feeling that I make something great, that I help people feel free by providing them the knowledge they need in order to take serious decisions about their lives.


Most of all, it gives me the feeling that I makeam doing something great, that I help people feel free by providing them with the knowledge they need in order to take serious decisions about their lives.

Most of all, it gives me the feeling that I make something great,; that I help people feel free by providing them with the knowledge they need in order to take serious decisions about their lives.

"most of all" is a weak interruption so separated from rest of sentence with a comma. There are two related sentences so I have used a semi-colon to join them. "providing WITH the knowledge"

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