Nov. 22, 2022
My Job
My Job
I was transferred to my current department in June 2020. The name of the department is called agricultural radio broadcasting and television school, which focuses on training the farmers in the district I belong to.
Every year, my department will train 300 farmers. These farmers will be in six different classes based on what they are growing.
There are classes which specialize in vegetables, fruits, crops, agricultural machines, livestock and so on.
If the farmers mainly plant vegetables, then they will join the vegetables class. If farmers mainly grow fruits, then they will join the fruit classes.
The classes have different training durations, the shortest one will be 6 days and the longest one will be 16 days.
The courses being taught for each class contain two types of training: indoor theoretical training and field training. The ratio of practical lessons to theoretical lessons is usually one to one or two to one.
The start time of training each year is at the end of April or the early of May and the end time of the training each year is usually at the end of November or the early of December.
Now, my department has finished this year's training. In the following months, my coworkers and I will mainly do the documents to meet various inspections from various superior departments.
My Job
My Job
I was transferred to my current department in June 2020.
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The department is called, Agricultural Radio Broadcasting and Television School, which focuses on training farmers in the district to which I belong.
Every year, my department will train 300 farmers.
These farmers will be in six different classes based on what they are growing.
There are classes which specialize in vegetables, fruits, crops, agricultural machines, livestock and so on.
If the farmers mainly plant vegetables, then they will join the vegetables class.
If farmers mainly grow fruits, (then) they will join the fruit classes.
The classes have different training durations, t. The shortest one will beis 6 days andwhile the longest one will beis 16 days.
The courses being taught for each class contain two types of training: indoor theoretical training and field training.
The ratio of practical lessons to theoretical lessons is usually one to one or two to one.
The start time of training each year is at the end of April or at the earlybeginning of May and the end time of the training each year is usually at the end of November or the earlybeginning of December.
I changed the wording to maintain parallel sentence construction.
Now, my department has finished this year's training.
In the following months, my coworkers and I will mainly dowork on the documents to meet various inspections from various superior departments.
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Very interesting and well-written subject.
Nov. 22, 2022
Thank you very much.
The name of the department is called a"Agricultural rRadio bBroadcasting and tTelevision sSchool", which focuses on training the farmers in the district I belong to.
These farmers will be inplaced into six different classes based on what they are growing.
If the farmers mainly plantgrow vegetables, then they will join the vegetables class.
If the farmers mainly grow fruits, then they will join the fruit classes.
The start time of training each year is at the end of April or the earlystart of May, and the end time of the training each year is usuallytraining usually finishes at the end of November or the earlystart of December.
In the following months, my coworkers and I will mainly do thprepare documents in order to meet variousthe inspections from various super requirements from more senior departments.
Nov. 22, 2022
Thank you very much.
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If farmers mainly grow fruits, then they will join the fruit classes. If the farmers mainly grow fruits, then they will join the fruit classes. If farmers mainly grow fruits, (then) they will join the fruit classes. |
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The start time of training each year is at the end of April or the early of May and the end time of the training each year is usually at the end of November or the early of December. The start time of training each year is at the end of April or the The start time of training each year is at the end of April or at the I changed the wording to maintain parallel sentence construction. |
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