My Introduction.

My name is mMokshita.

I'm 18 yerars old.

I love to do dance.

I'm a quite a good artist.

I like painting and, particularly traditional painting.

I just want to completachieve my dream.s.

I am super focused towards achieving my dreams.

My goal is to become an IFS (INDIAN FORIEGN SERVICE). employee.

My mom is super supportive and never gives me any negative thoughts that canmay demotivate me.

I have myan elder brother.

So this is my cute little cute story onf myself.

My name is mMokshita.

I'm 18 yerars old.

I like painting and traditional painting.

I 'm super focused towardson reaching my dreams.

My goal is to become an IFS officer/member (INDIAN FORIEGN SERVICE).

Since IFS is the name of the organization, you need some kind of noun to indicate your place within the organization.

My mom is super supportive and never givevoices any negative thoughts that canould demotivate me.

Who always annoys me.

I would combine these sentences into "I have my elder brother, who always annoys me."

So this is my cute little cute story on myself.

The sentence is fine as is, but when using "cute" and "little" together, we usually put "cute" first. I can't explain why that is, but it sounds more natural that way.