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Generally when making a title for something it will be in all caps, but still good!

Study destination, what about it.?

I think making this sentence a question could add interest instead of it being just a statement.

Maybe it´s sounds simple, or maybe its just another superfluous question with b. It's rarely importancet to the mayjority of the people but. It's something we don´'t notice, it´sbeing one of the most important decision that we´'ve to take alone.

Adding more than 1-2 commas generally isn't a great way to extend a sentence. Chopping the sentence into many sentences can help prevent run-ons. "It's" is a combined "it is". A good tip is to make sure your sentence still makes sense when saying "it is" if you are going to use "it's".

The word 'importance' is usually only used when talking about how important a certain thing is in the moment. ex: "The importance of this meeting to your career is substantial." or "Knowing the importance of your online safety is crucial"
ex for important: "I need you in my office, it's very important." or "I have an important matter to discuss with you."

I also changed 'barely' to 'rarely' since barely can imply that it is something people are struggling to find important. Using 'rarely' can instead imply that its fleeting; something people often neglect to think about or don't care for.

You are also not using an apostrophe, I think it may be your keyboard ^^'

There´s a lot of help from institutions, familiy, etc.,

You could combine this sentence and the next one, but its not necessary persay.

Bbut in the end, its not the case.

The impact onf our proyjection is invaluable.

In this text, using my experiencia ie, I'm going to point in the first placeshow the importance and them where is my ideal destination is.

Using 'I'm' instead of 'I' flows better and is grammatically correct, since "i am going to" is clearer.
In the second half, I fixed some sentence structure with what I thought you meant to say. Sorry if I'm wrong!

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Comfortable zone is technically correct but 'comfort zone' is a casual and more common way to phrase it.
'Inner' sounds like 'in our' but does not mean the same thing. 'Inner' refers to inside something, while 'in our' can be a way to metaphorically say something is in us, or it could be literal with context.
Using 'getting' instead of 'get' here is important because 'getting' is referring to the action of moving. 'Get' is usually used when asking someone to 'get up' or likewise.

Why move on or change something when its already works and almost w? Why take somthe risks.?

This is the beginnings of a run-on sentence without commas or separations. Since you start off with 'why', making the sentences questions can help convey that ask better.

This is the question, th is the breaking point. For me, at least to me.

The way you phrased this is very convoluted. Breaking it down into chunks instead of trying to make it one sentence can often be the best route.
By putting your main argument that the question is your breaking point before you say 'at least for me' can clear things up.

IEven in childhood, even now I admire,d the people who left histheir mark in history, who mades; making social, and politicals changes and t. There´'s a constant study far froom home.

I would only use his/her pronouns when talking about someone specific. Using they/them/their is better for generalization.
Using too many commas can make your sentences complicated to read, since commas are generally used for pauses in speech. 1-2 commas is a good ratio per sentence, if any.

I take all this context, then make a point to justifice,y my ideal destination and W; why I did this, i. I believe every space, even a small one, can have an impact.

I don´t have an ideal place, the only thing that i´I'm sure about is abroad of my country.

Just the apostrophe!

TIn the experienciae of opening your mind, notice that your world is small and out of ithem are some incredibles realitys,ies and cultures. This is one of the most beautiful experiences in life.

'experience' is present tense, as well as the rest of your sentences. Using one tense is important.

The conclusion of this small text: wherever you have toan idea to study, try tofor that opction be outside, far froom your safe zone and. I promise it will chancge your history and your life.

My ideal study destinationplace of study

Study destinationPlace of study, what about it.?

I'm not completely sure what you mean by "study destination". I have a feeling you actually mean something like "place of study". Otherwise, it feels like you are maybe talking about a career path?

Maybe it´s sounds simple or like just another superfluous question with barely any importance to the mayjority of the people, but (we don´t notice, i?). It´s one of the most important decisions that we´ have to take alone.

I'm confused by the phrase "we don't notice". Do you mean something like, "but that doesn't matter"?

There´s a lot of help from institutions, familiy, etc.

The phrasing of this sentence is a little strange. How about, "We can get a lot of help from institutions, family, etc" or "Institutions, family, etc, can provide a lot of help."

But in the end its nothis isn't the case.

This corrected sentence works well on its own, but in the context of the rest of the text, it doesn't make much sense. Was the last sentence supposed to be something like, "YOU WOULD THINK THERE WOULD BE a lot of help from institutions..."?

The impact on our proyjection is invaluable.

I'm not sure what you mean by "projection".

In this text, using my experiencia ie, I'm going to point in the first place the importanceexplain, first, the importance of an ideal place of study, and themn, where is my ideal destinationthat place for me.

Getting out of your conmfortable zone is toovery hard because of thise sensation, of instinct is innernside our braminds.

"Too" is a very particular word. If you say something is "too hard", you are saying it is, quite simply, impossible to do because of its difficulty. I don't think this is what you mean.

"Brain" is a kind of silly, maybe even juvenile term to use in this context. At least, I personally think so.

Why move on or change something when its already works, and almost why take some risks.

This is the question, and this is the (breakpoint?), at least to me.

I'm not sure what you mean by "breakpoint".

In childhood, and even now still, I admire, the people who left histheir mark in history, who mades social, politicals changes; and there´s a constant study far froom home.

I take all this context, then make a point to justificey, my ideal destination andplace of study. Why did I dido this, i? I believe every space, even a small one, can have an impact.

"I take all this context, then make a point to justify" sounds very strange. How about, "I say all this in order to justify my ideal place of study"?

I don´t have an ideal place, t. The only thing that i´m sureI'm sure about is that it is abroad of my country.

The experienciae of opening your mind, and noticeing that your world is small, and out of themside of it are some incredibles realitys, cies. Cultures is one of the most beautiful experiences in life.

The conclusion of this small text is: whernever you have to ideawant to study, try to that opcion bedo it outside, far froom your safe zone, and I promise it will chancge your historyfuture and your life.

"Chance" means probability, and has to do with luck or randomness.

"History" is a word used primarily for important or formal events of the past. I'm pretty sure you mean "future".