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We say "want to talk" (not "want talk") and "to improve" (not "for improve"). Also, it's better to say "what my ideal holiday would be like" instead of "how will be."

Well , first of all , I have always dream with goed of going to Bali .

We say "dream of going," not "dream with go." "I’ve always dreamed" sounds more natural when talking about something you've wanted for a long time.

I think that iit’s the perfect destination to travel with firiends .

Just fixing a little typo in "friends" and using "it’s" to refer to Bali properly.

And also it´s aIt’s such a beautiful place that it’s a pity because everyone wants to go to Bali here.

"Such a beautiful place" is the correct order. Also, "everyone wants" (not "want"), and since we already mentioned Bali, we can just say "go there."

Bali is famous for her delightedits beautiful landscapes and villes , since yages. You can dgo camping in one of the amazing tents into the middle of the forest and intregrate with the wildworld connect with nature.

"Its" is used for places or things, not "her." Also, we say "beautiful landscapes," not "delighted," and "villages" instead of the French word "villes."

For this reason , i recommend you go to Bali carry on a littleIf you go to Bali, take a small backpack with you , where you can carry on a some suitswim , beach clothes for intance a pair of sandals or flip flops , shorts or anything that you dress in a beach place , a so result of that , in Bali the wheather is complete sunny and the temperature is warm , but a dpack some swimsuits. As a result, Bali is usually sunny. Despite of that , it’s true that , some days , there may be strorms or rainys , for this reason i. I recommend you taketaking an umbrella with you .

"Take" works better here than "carry on." Also, we say "some swimsuits," not "a some suitswim."We say "despite that," not "despite of that." Also, fix the spelling for "storms" and use just "rain" instead of "rainys." An umbrella" (not "a umbrella") because "umbrella" starts with a vowel sound. And we usually say "recommend taking" something.

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Demand for" is the right expression (not "demand of") and "demande" was a small spelling error. Use "therefore" instead of "therefone" and "search for," not "searching a."

To Finally , my last advice for you is ,is: if you want to go to Bali , you mustshould take a place , owing to is the transport for sure and fast that can exist ne, as it’s the fastest and most reliable transport. If I have the opportunity to go, I’ll definitely go with my best friends.

"Finally" works better than "To finally." Also, "take a plane" makes sense here "place" was just a typo. The rest is just cleaning up for smoother phrasing. Capitalize "I," fix the spelling of "opportunity," and saying "I’ll definitely go" is a more natural ending.

Today , I want talk about how will be my ideal holiday for improve my english and my vocabulary .

I want TO talk. About my ideal holiday. To improve.

Well , first of all , I always dream with go to Bali .

I always dream OF GOING to Bali

I think that is the perfect destination to travel with firends .

Friends

And also it´s a such beutiful place that is a pity because everyone want to go to Bali .

Everyone wantS

Bali is famous for her delighted landscapes and villes , since you can do camping in one of amazing tents into middle of the forest and intregrate with the wildworld .

For IT'S delightFUL landscapes. BECAUSE YOU can do camping