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englishpuppy

Sept. 23, 2021

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My husband is cooking Spaghetti

Dear man! Do you not know how to cook spaghetti?
Do you need the help of an experienced cook?
I will help you:
Start with a very large pot of water-- about six liters per 1 kg of pasta.
Add salt and the pasta, and let it cook.
Try the pasta after a few minutes to see if it is soft and elastic.
Drain the pasta and it is ready to eat.
You can also pour some sauce over the pasta.

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My hHusband iIs cCooking Spaghetti

You could also write “spaghetti” instead of capitalizing it. The capitalization in the original version is inconsistent.

Dear man!

Do you not know how to cook spaghetti?

Do you need the help of an experienced cook?

I will help you:

Start with a very large pot of water-- about six6 liters per 1 kg of pasta.

For consistency, “six” and “one” should either both be written as words or both be written as digits. I went with the latter since this is a situation where you are emphasizing specific quantities.

Add salt and the pasta, and let it cook.

Try the pasta after a few minutes to see if it is soft and elastic.

Drain the pasta and it is ready to eat.

You can also pour some sauce over the pasta.

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Great job! Just some small orthographic improvements needed.

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englishpuppy

Sept. 28, 2021

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Thank you

My husband is cooking Spaghetti


My hHusband iIs cCooking Spaghetti

You could also write “spaghetti” instead of capitalizing it. The capitalization in the original version is inconsistent.

Dear man!


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Do you not know how to cook spaghetti?


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Do you need the help of an experienced cook?


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I will help you:


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Start with a very large pot of water-- about six liters per 1 kg of pasta.


Start with a very large pot of water-- about six6 liters per 1 kg of pasta.

For consistency, “six” and “one” should either both be written as words or both be written as digits. I went with the latter since this is a situation where you are emphasizing specific quantities.

Add salt and the pasta, and let it cook.


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Try the pasta after a few minutes to see if it is soft and elastic.


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Drain the pasta and it is ready to eat.


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You can also pour some sauce over the pasta.


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