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SummerTeaWater

June 25, 2021

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My House

I am living in Suwon where is the capital city of Gyunggi province.

More than one million citizens are living in this city, so many apartments are here and there.

My house is also an apartment which is 23 stories tall.

There are three bedrooms , one kitchen, one living room in my house.

One bedroom is for my three sons, and there are three desks for them

The other room is for my wife and me, and two computers are there.

The smaller one is used for a library, so many books are on book shelves there.

Since I can release my stress, I like this room.

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My House

I am living in Suwon whereich is the capital city of Gyunggi province.

More than one million citizens are living in this city, so many apartments are here and there.

My house is also an apartment which is 23 stories tall.

There are three bedrooms , one kitchen, and one living room in my house.

One bedroom is for my three sons, and there are three desks for them

The other room is for my wife and me, and two computers are there.

You can also say:"The other room us for my wife and me, and it has two computers"

The smaller one is used foras a library, so many books are on book shelves there.

Since I can release my stress, I like this room.

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SummerTeaWater

June 25, 2021

402

Thank you very much!

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passion123

June 25, 2021

0

No problem!

My House


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I am living in Suwon where is the capital city of Gyunggi province.


I am living in Suwon whereich is the capital city of Gyunggi province.

More than one million citizens are living in this city, so many apartments are here and there.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

My house is also an apartment which is 23 stories tall.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

There are three bedrooms , one kitchen, one living room in my house.


There are three bedrooms , one kitchen, and one living room in my house.

One bedroom is for my three sons, and there are three desks for them


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The other room is for my wife and me, and two computers are there.


The other room is for my wife and me, and two computers are there.

You can also say:"The other room us for my wife and me, and it has two computers"

The smaller one is used for a library, so many books are on book shelves there.


The smaller one is used foras a library, so many books are on book shelves there.

Since I can release my stress, I like this room.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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