June 10, 2023
MY HOMETOWN
I was born in a small city. The population here is about 1,100,000 people. The people here are friendly. My city is know for a famous mountain. There are many people visit here every year. My family has four people: parient, old brother and me. They live in here and I live in other city. When I have free time, I usually visit relatives. I come back to hometown about once a month.
My city is know for aits famous mountain.
The mountain is in your city, so it sounds more natural to relate them to each other.
There are many people who visit here every year.
My family has four people: my parients, my older brother, and me.
They live in heremy hometown and I live in another city.
The reader is not in the city, so it's clearer if you say 'hometown' and not 'here'.
I come back to my hometown about once a month.
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Great writing! Your errors were very small and I could understand everything easily. Your hometown sounds very interesting.
June 10, 2023
Thank you very much!
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MY HOMETOWN |
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I was born in a small city. |
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The population here is about 1,100,000 people. |
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The people here are friendly. |
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My city is know for a famous mountain. My city is know for The mountain is in your city, so it sounds more natural to relate them to each other. |
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There are many people visit here every year. There are many people who visit here every year. |
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My family has four people: parient, old brother and me. My family has four people: my par |
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They live in here and I live in other city. They live in The reader is not in the city, so it's clearer if you say 'hometown' and not 'here'. |
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When I have free time, I usually visit relatives. |
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I come back to hometown about once a month. I come back to my hometown about once a month. |
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