Feb. 14, 2022
Where is your hometown?
My hometown is in Venezuela. It is a little city called Carora. I have a lot of memories there. I grow up and studied school there.
Do you like your hometown?
Yes, I like it a lot. The only thing that I don’t like is a so little city whose services, transportation, entertainment isn’t good at all.
Do you often visit your hometown?
No, I don’t. The latest time that I was there, it was about 5 years. I hope some day go back. I still have family there.
What is your hometown like?
It is a little city, the weather is hot, the local people are friendly, it is a city with bunch culture from huge colonial houses to the gastronomic, the food it is delicious.
What is the oldest place in your hometown?
There is a church so old, it built up in century XV, which it is a place attractive for many tourists.
What is there for a foreigner to do or see in your hometown?
I think, many foreigners like the architecture the colonial zone in the old downtown, is very nice. This move you back toward past centuries.
How could your hometown be improved?
As I said before, it would be better have good services, transportation and entertainment. It would be a city more attractive for tourists.
Has your hometown changed much since you were a child?
A little, I can see through photos it looks almost equal since I went out there.
Is there good public transportation in your hometown?
No, in fact most people usually use their own car, you can arrive to many places because everything is close one another.
Do you think your hometown is a good place to bring up children?
Yes, of course. It so secure for any child, but I think that any child will bore very quickly. It is a city more attractive for adults.
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No, in fact, most people usually usdrive their own car, you can arrive to get around the city. You can easily go/get to many places because everything is close to one another.
One of the correctors forgot to put "to" after "go". "Use" is fine but I think it would be more natural to say "drive".
My hometown
Where is your hometown?
My hometown is in Venezuela.
It is a little city called Carora.
I have a lot of memories there.
I groew up and studied school there.
You “study a topic” and “study AT a place, “ so you could say “I studied history there” or “I studied at school there,” but you can also just say “studied” an we will assume it was your general school education.
Do you like your hometown?
Yes, I like it a lot.
The only thing that I don’t like is a soliving in such a little city whose services, transportation, entertainment isn’t good at all.
Do you often visit your hometown?
No, I don’t.
The latest time that I was there, it was about 5 years ago.
I hope some day to go back.
I still have family there.
What is your hometown like?
It is a little city, the weather is hot, and the local people are friendly, i. It is a city with bunch culture from huge colonial houses to the gastronomic, the food it is delicious.
I don’t know what “It is a city with bunch culture from huge colonial houses to the gastronomic” means. Are you talking about brunch culture? Or just lots of culture? And I’m not sure what you’re saying with “to the gastronomic.”
What is the oldest place in your hometown?
There is a very old church so old, it built up inin the 15th century XV, which it is a places an attractive place for many tourists.
What is there for a foreigner to do or see in your hometown?
I think, many foreigners like the architecture of the colonial zone in the old downtown, is very nice.
This move you back toward past centuries.
How could your hometown be improved?
As I said before, it would be better to have good services, transportation and entertainment.
It would be a city more attractive for tourists.
Has your hometown changed much since you were a child?
A little, I can see through photos it looks almost equal since Iidentical as whent out there I left.
“Equal” doesn’t necessarily mean the same, its used more when talking about the number or size of two things being the same.
Is there good public transportation in your hometown?
No, in fact most people usually use their own car, you can arriveget to many places because everything is close to one another.
Do you think your hometown is a good place to bring up children?
Yes, of course.
It so secure for any child, but I think that any child will bore very quickly.
It is a city more attractive for adults.
Feedback
Thank you for sharing!
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Where is your hometown?
My hometown is in Venezuela.
It is a little city called Carora.
I have a lot of memories from there.
I groew up and studiedwent to school there.
Do you like your hometown?
Yes, I like it a lot.
The only thing that I don’t like is a so little city whosethat it is a small city with no good services, transportation, or entertainment isn’t good at all.
Do you often visit your hometown?
No, I don’t.
The latest time that I was there, it was about 5 years ago.
I hope some day to go back.
I still have family there.
What is your hometown like?
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I broke this sentence into two because it was becoming a run-on sentence. This way it is easier to read and makes more sense.
What is the oldest place in your hometown?
There is an old church so old, it built up in century XV, which it is a placebuilt in the 15th Century that attractive fors many tourists.
What is there for a foreigner to do or see in your hometown?
I think, many foreigners would like the colonial architecture the colonial zone in the old downtown,. It is very nice.
This move you back toward past centuriesIt makes you feel as though you are centuries in the past.
I think this is what you were trying to say. That visiting the old downtown area is like walking into the past, right?
How could your hometown be improved?
As I said before, it would be better have goodgood if it had better services, transportation and entertainment.
It would be a city more attractive forto tourists.
Has your hometown changed much since you were a child?
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Is there good public transportation in your hometown?
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Do you think your hometown is a good place to bring up children?
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Feedback
This is good! You have a good grasp of vocabulary and expressing your thoughts. I would focus a little more on how you construct sentences because I noticed a few run-on sentences (meaning a single sentence that should be split into multiple sentences). But this is a good piece and I feel like I have an idea of what your hometown is like. It sounds really nice, actually.
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