Aug. 8, 2025
My holidays in Dubai
Me and my father went 5 days to Dubai.
On the first day we arrived with Emirates at Dubai airport. A half hour later we passed the immigration and went to bed.
On the second day we saw the expectional Burj Khalifa and we also got up on the highest building of the world.
The third day was a relaxing day. We went to our hotel pool, we got tanned and swam in the pool. In the evening we also went to a mall. Later we got back to the hotel and fall asleep.
And on the fourth day we did a desert Safari
A Taxi picked us up in our Hotel.
After a comfortable ride wich was about an hour we arrived in a desert Station who got our quads. Then we drove the quads for an hour and got with the same Taxi back and relaxed the Rest of the day in our Hotel.
On the last day I only have few things to tell
We went really early to the airport. Our flight was on time and it was a pleasant flight.
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When speaking about yourself and someone else, you always say “… and I” rather than “me”.
You could say “I went to Dubai for five days” or “I spent five days in Dubai”.
Usually you can write out numbers under ten, rather than using it’s number. Here you would write “five” rather than “5”.
On the first day, we arrived with Emirates at the Dubai airport.
The phrase “we arrived with Emirates” isn’t as natural, you could say something like “we flew Emirates” or “the airline was Emirates”
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It may be more natural to say, “we passed through” or “we went through”
On the second day we saw the expectional Burj Khalifa and we also gowent up on the highest building ofin the world.
The third day was a relaxing day.
We went to our hotel pool, we got tanned and swam in the pool.
In the evening we also went to athe mall.
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Later we got back to the hotel and faell asleep.
Fell asleep is past tense, to fall asleep is an action.
And on the fourth day we did a desert Safari
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My holidays in Dubai
Me and my father went 5 days to Dubai.
On the first day we arrived with Emirates at Dubai airport.
A half hour later we passed the immigration and went to bed.
On the second day we saw the expectional Burj Khalifa and we also got up on the highest building of the world.
The third day was a relaxing day.
We went to our hotel pool, we got tanned and swam in the pool.
In the evening we also went to a mall.
Later we got back to the hotel and fall asleep.
OnFor the last day I only have a few things to tell
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We went really early to the airport.
Our flight was on time and it was a pleasant flight.
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Me and my father went 5 days to Dubai. This sentence has been marked as perfect! M When speaking about yourself and someone else, you always say “… and I” rather than “me”. You could say “I went to Dubai for five days” or “I spent five days in Dubai”. Usually you can write out numbers under ten, rather than using it’s number. Here you would write “five” rather than “5”. |
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On the first day we arrived with Emirates at Dubai airport. This sentence has been marked as perfect! On the first day, we arrived The phrase “we arrived with Emirates” isn’t as natural, you could say something like “we flew Emirates” or “the airline was Emirates” |
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A half hour later we passed the immigration and went to bed. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
It may be more natural to say, “we passed through” or “we went through” |
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On the second day we saw the expectional Burj Khalifa and we also got up on the highest building of the world. This sentence has been marked as perfect! On the second day we saw the expectional Burj Khalifa and we also |
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We went to our hotel pool, we got tanned and swam in the pool. This sentence has been marked as perfect! We went to our hotel pool, we |
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Later we got back to the hotel and fall asleep. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Later we got back to the hotel and f Fell asleep is past tense, to fall asleep is an action. |
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And on the fourth day we did a desert Safari A Taxi picked us up in our Hotel. And on the fourth day we did a desert Safari |
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After a comfortable ride wich was about an hour we arrived in a desert Station who got our quads. After a comfortable ride, which was about an hour long, we arrived in a desert |
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Then we drove the quads for an hour and got with the same Taxi back and relaxed the Rest of the day in our Hotel. Then we drove the quads for an hour and |
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On the last day I only have few things to tell We went really early to the airport.
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